Utopia
Quality and Equality11 total reviews
Comment from artemis53
pi like this piece immensely. the simple words speak volumes and the message is very clear. I wish you my best on the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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pi like this piece immensely. the simple words speak volumes and the message is very clear. I wish you my best on the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your review.
Steve
Comment from guinea
Good job you got everything as requested. Thats takes a lot of deep thought. i like this very much. May the best poem win. God bless.
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Good job you got everything as requested. Thats takes a lot of deep thought. i like this very much. May the best poem win. God bless.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your review.
Steve
Comment from Chris Tee
Steve your poem "Utopia" is an excellent poem although the rhyming scheme suggest some format.... However I feel that "ity" is bad rhyme to choose in poetry. Maybe just me?? I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and 5 stars.
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Steve your poem "Utopia" is an excellent poem although the rhyming scheme suggest some format.... However I feel that "ity" is bad rhyme to choose in poetry. Maybe just me?? I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and 5 stars.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thanks, Chris - he 'ity' rhymes were just for fun.
Steve
Comment from humpwhistle
Very nice job with some unusual restrictions, Steve.
I really like your rhymes and your message.
I too take issue with the 'bigger is better'
mentality that pervades my corner of the globe.
According to the rules of the prompt, this contest
this contest must be over. I hope you won.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Very nice job with some unusual restrictions, Steve.
I really like your rhymes and your message.
I too take issue with the 'bigger is better'
mentality that pervades my corner of the globe.
According to the rules of the prompt, this contest
this contest must be over. I hope you won.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thanks, Lee.
Most reviewers assumed I was writing about FanStory - do you think we qualify as a Utopia of fairness?
Steve
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Myopia is a common affliction among FSers. L
Comment from EmmaJoAnderson
I really liked this. I would have loved to see an image perhaps, but I just really enjoyed reading this little quick poem. It fit the prompt well and I really enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme scheme. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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I really liked this. I would have loved to see an image perhaps, but I just really enjoyed reading this little quick poem. It fit the prompt well and I really enjoyed your rhythm and rhyme scheme. Good job!
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your review.
Steve
Comment from Skyangel02
I find your line about worshipping all immensity being a sign of density quite amusing. It makes me think of the religious people who worship all immensity.
I understand you are talking about quantity vs quality.
I like your poem. I prefer quality to quantity but quantity still wins on this site. The winner is the one with the most points which are gained by quantity.
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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I find your line about worshipping all immensity being a sign of density quite amusing. It makes me think of the religious people who worship all immensity.
I understand you are talking about quantity vs quality.
I like your poem. I prefer quality to quantity but quantity still wins on this site. The winner is the one with the most points which are gained by quantity.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Steve
Comment from Vladilynn
Whoa!!! Like this rhyming poem. But I like the most and make me laugh is the contest rule DO NOT PROMOTE!!!! Somebody will not be happy about this one. Nah! Not me....not right now because I got nothing to promote and needs to earn cents for.
I'm just goofing around and saw this contest. Lol
Fun ha!
Like you poem so it's worth to read and review.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Whoa!!! Like this rhyming poem. But I like the most and make me laugh is the contest rule DO NOT PROMOTE!!!! Somebody will not be happy about this one. Nah! Not me....not right now because I got nothing to promote and needs to earn cents for.
I'm just goofing around and saw this contest. Lol
Fun ha!
Like you poem so it's worth to read and review.
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your review.
Steve+
Comment from DIS-illusioned
Thanks for entering the comp, kiwi.
Very interesting and good rhyme scheme here.
The message in that first stanza is a gem, and so well presented.
Great, smooth meter flow to the read.
"And may the best one win!"
Oh yes indeed, may it.
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thanks for entering the comp, kiwi.
Very interesting and good rhyme scheme here.
The message in that first stanza is a gem, and so well presented.
Great, smooth meter flow to the read.
"And may the best one win!"
Oh yes indeed, may it.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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And thank you for creating something a bit different! I enjoyed the challenge.
Steve
Comment from bowls
You've blended those required expressions in beautifully. There seems to be no obvious attempt to include them so smoothly does your poem flow. I presume you're writing about fanstory and the camaraderie involved. Great use of rhyme to create a really effective sound and bounce. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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You've blended those required expressions in beautifully. There seems to be no obvious attempt to include them so smoothly does your poem flow. I presume you're writing about fanstory and the camaraderie involved. Great use of rhyme to create a really effective sound and bounce. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your review.
Steve
Comment from playinaround
This was a fun and interesting read.. words flow trippingly off the tongue. Excuse my spelling please. Good luck in this interesting contest!
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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This was a fun and interesting read.. words flow trippingly off the tongue. Excuse my spelling please. Good luck in this interesting contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2012
reply by the author on 26-May-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and the wonderful array of stars.
Steve
