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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Christine."
The author tells a tale how he tried to better him

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Comment from Misrael
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Short, sweet and to the point. I take it that the friend was another guy who turned out to be a rival. That is what I get out of it. may the best man or woman win. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


reply by the author on 09-May-2012
    Thank you
Comment from Meta~Mark
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wow...love at sweet 16. I worked as a bar clean up boy at an Italian restaurant and we would steal the whisky and put out in the garbage and after work drink until we were in oblivion..minus the beautiful girl in your story.

Great story!!!

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


reply by the author on 09-May-2012
    Thank you