Mirror
a man discover himself.....95 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, average joe, you did a great job writing this poem about the person that finds his mirror image fascinating. the only suggestion i would make would be to darken the background a little bit to make the words stand out. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, average joe, you did a great job writing this poem about the person that finds his mirror image fascinating. the only suggestion i would make would be to darken the background a little bit to make the words stand out. i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from justchillin
This is so very clever. Great subject for this 5 7 5, self image, very well described, and presented. Well done for this creative poem, and thank you for sharing
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This is so very clever. Great subject for this 5 7 5, self image, very well described, and presented. Well done for this creative poem, and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your 5-7-5 poem, Mirror, is interesting indeed. So this man is taking a good long look at himself in the mirror! Good syllable form of 5-7-5.
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Your 5-7-5 poem, Mirror, is interesting indeed. So this man is taking a good long look at himself in the mirror! Good syllable form of 5-7-5.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very enjoyable 5-7-5 poem. So deep in thought and very true and enjoyable. Good luck in the 5-7-5 contest. Self-discovery is a wonderful feeling!!! Debbie
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Very enjoyable 5-7-5 poem. So deep in thought and very true and enjoyable. Good luck in the 5-7-5 contest. Self-discovery is a wonderful feeling!!! Debbie
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from wolfgangdad
This is very worthy of winning the contest. Sylvia Plath's Mirror views you objectively and your mirror is viewed by you subjectively. But in both cases the mirror it swallows immediatly as you see it at the speed of light.
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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This is very worthy of winning the contest. Sylvia Plath's Mirror views you objectively and your mirror is viewed by you subjectively. But in both cases the mirror it swallows immediatly as you see it at the speed of light.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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thank you for the kind comment . i appreciate it
Comment from Maustin
Interesting work you created. I says a lot in limited words. It flows nicely. It is the type of work that lingers in the reader's mind for awhile, after the read. Good job.
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Interesting work you created. I says a lot in limited words. It flows nicely. It is the type of work that lingers in the reader's mind for awhile, after the read. Good job.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from inkedone
This is very clever writing. I really like this poem. It's thoughtful and creative. I don't read poetry much but this one caught my eye.
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This is very clever writing. I really like this poem. It's thoughtful and creative. I don't read poetry much but this one caught my eye.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi average Joe,
Well... you may be average but I felt your cute and clever little 5/7/5 was above average. I enjoyed reading this one and wish you the best for the contest. Warm regards,
W ^-^
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Hi average Joe,
Well... you may be average but I felt your cute and clever little 5/7/5 was above average. I enjoyed reading this one and wish you the best for the contest. Warm regards,
W ^-^
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from Frank Atwood
Nice and to the point. Are you sure you know who you are really looking at in that mirror? Are you who you think you are and can you see that deep within you physic to see you as God sees you?
I truly believe you could have gone deeper into yourself and shared more, thus it would have added more into who you are, not just for yourself, but also to your readers. I gave this 5 stars, for I can see improvement within it should you see deeper into that mirror. God bless.
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Nice and to the point. Are you sure you know who you are really looking at in that mirror? Are you who you think you are and can you see that deep within you physic to see you as God sees you?
I truly believe you could have gone deeper into yourself and shared more, thus it would have added more into who you are, not just for yourself, but also to your readers. I gave this 5 stars, for I can see improvement within it should you see deeper into that mirror. God bless.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from Phoenix Rising
Good one,
averagejoe. As long as he does what you do, you are ok.
what I like most about this poem is that the deeper you look into it, no pun intended, the more you see it's depth in message.
My pleasure to read and review.
Phoenix Rising
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Good one,
averagejoe. As long as he does what you do, you are ok.
what I like most about this poem is that the deeper you look into it, no pun intended, the more you see it's depth in message.
My pleasure to read and review.
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 20-May-2012
