Mirror
a man discover himself.....95 total reviews
Comment from MumEsGirl
This was a very succint work. In a few words you have captured the very essence of the contest requirements.
All we ever see in a mirror is a reverse image of ourselves, and you have just proved the point. Mind you I have often wondered what my dogs see when they look in the mirror lol
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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This was a very succint work. In a few words you have captured the very essence of the contest requirements.
All we ever see in a mirror is a reverse image of ourselves, and you have just proved the point. Mind you I have often wondered what my dogs see when they look in the mirror lol
hugs
kate
Comment Written 20-May-2012
reply by the author on 20-May-2012
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your too nice, thank you
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your too nice, thank you
Comment from clumsyninja
Nice work. These types of poems seem quite tricky. I think I'm inspired to write one now. Nice imagery from such a short piece. It is very striking and to the point.
Well done
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Nice work. These types of poems seem quite tricky. I think I'm inspired to write one now. Nice imagery from such a short piece. It is very striking and to the point.
Well done
Comment Written 20-May-2012
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thank you, i would like to read yours if you write one...
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thank you, i would like to read yours if you write one...
Comment from volunteer angel
How true! A large magnifying mirror really tells a story. All those little whiskers that we can't see to pluck on our face, blackheads and spots are also revealed. It sometimes doesn't pay to look in the mirror. LOL Hugs, V.A.
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How true! A large magnifying mirror really tells a story. All those little whiskers that we can't see to pluck on our face, blackheads and spots are also revealed. It sometimes doesn't pay to look in the mirror. LOL Hugs, V.A.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
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lol... thank you
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lol... thank you
Comment from mermaids
Creative haiku. The reader can see the image being reflected in the mirror or even water in a pond. You did well with the haiku form and developed a poem with a unique
theme of looking at oneself.
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Creative haiku. The reader can see the image being reflected in the mirror or even water in a pond. You did well with the haiku form and developed a poem with a unique
theme of looking at oneself.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
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thank you for your kind response
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thank you for your kind response
Comment from Terry wrote
How clever this is! In such a short form it is often possible to fit the bill, and sometimes it is achievable to create humor, but this one does both of those and leaves one wondering why it didn't seem obvious from the title - and yet it wasn't. Well done!
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How clever this is! In such a short form it is often possible to fit the bill, and sometimes it is achievable to create humor, but this one does both of those and leaves one wondering why it didn't seem obvious from the title - and yet it wasn't. Well done!
Comment Written 20-May-2012
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thank you
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thank you
Comment from c_lucas
"He and I are... one" - This came to me while reading your poem, but I think "me" has more meaning. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.
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"He and I are... one" - This came to me while reading your poem, but I think "me" has more meaning. This is very well written. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
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thank you
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from jaeladarling
I love the depth and emotion in this poem. It's a real literary victory to fit so much into so few words. :) Enjoyed this very much; thank you for sharing!
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I love the depth and emotion in this poem. It's a real literary victory to fit so much into so few words. :) Enjoyed this very much; thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from ameen786
Who you fooling my friend, you are no 'averagejoe' you are an accomplished poet and this profound verse is testament to that; short, succinct and thought provoking, good luck!
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Who you fooling my friend, you are no 'averagejoe' you are an accomplished poet and this profound verse is testament to that; short, succinct and thought provoking, good luck!
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Comment from ShekinahGlory
Wow! Nice job with this poem.
Love the way the poem moves from alluding to eyes in the 2nd stanza and then moves to the unexpected conclusion..."he and I are...me"!
Love the personification of the mirror! "He blinks when I blink, etc"!
Message: The mirror always reflects you, and who you are!
Great job with this form 5-7-5!
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Wow! Nice job with this poem.
Love the way the poem moves from alluding to eyes in the 2nd stanza and then moves to the unexpected conclusion..."he and I are...me"!
Love the personification of the mirror! "He blinks when I blink, etc"!
Message: The mirror always reflects you, and who you are!
Great job with this form 5-7-5!
Comment Written 20-May-2012
Comment from Jane Johnson
Nice 5-7-5 verse. Thought provoking. I think a picture would be nice with someone looking in a mirror. Just my slant on it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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Nice 5-7-5 verse. Thought provoking. I think a picture would be nice with someone looking in a mirror. Just my slant on it. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 20-May-2012
