Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Irony of Fate"A collection of poetry.
19 total reviews
Comment from THE RAJE
Astonishing poem . Well done.A very good way of depicting two related accidental suicides.Very well written.There is absolutely nothing wrong with this masterpeice
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Astonishing poem . Well done.A very good way of depicting two related accidental suicides.Very well written.There is absolutely nothing wrong with this masterpeice
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from Balladeer
I think this is a sad and poignant story but I think it is well told in the flowing tone and feel./ I also felt that it should be broken up so as to make the read easier~ SKYE~
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I think this is a sad and poignant story but I think it is well told in the flowing tone and feel./ I also felt that it should be broken up so as to make the read easier~ SKYE~
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from elizabethpryde
oh what a calamity. What went wrong why did they not read your other poems, they lost the right path and POW plunged over the cliff. I admit I laughed at this one was it ok. very enjoyable and well worded....elizabethpryde
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oh what a calamity. What went wrong why did they not read your other poems, they lost the right path and POW plunged over the cliff. I admit I laughed at this one was it ok. very enjoyable and well worded....elizabethpryde
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from AWorkInProgress
How ironic! reminds me of romeo and juliet. a beautiful poem. I loved your imagery and the poem flowed well. I see no flaw in it. well done ---PQ
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How ironic! reminds me of romeo and juliet. a beautiful poem. I loved your imagery and the poem flowed well. I see no flaw in it. well done ---PQ
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from giftsun
This is a really good poem. I'm not sure that I find it funny, it seemed more like dark irony. But I truly enjoyed it. Your rhyming and flow were excellent. Your poem reflects your admiration of Edgar Allan Poe, one of my favourite poets. You did an excellent job with this.
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This is a really good poem. I'm not sure that I find it funny, it seemed more like dark irony. But I truly enjoyed it. Your rhyming and flow were excellent. Your poem reflects your admiration of Edgar Allan Poe, one of my favourite poets. You did an excellent job with this.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from SamAyeM
What an enjoyable read. The rhythm and rhyme were superb and the irony of the ending couldn't have been better. I love your style of writing and look forward to more. Great job.
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What an enjoyable read. The rhythm and rhyme were superb and the irony of the ending couldn't have been better. I love your style of writing and look forward to more. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from Diny
This was very good
the story the rythum the ryhme the meter were all excellant
The only suggestion I may have is to put spaces between the stanzas, like every sixth line, in this one, you sould even break it up into efvery third line
But the structure is the least of your worries,
I enjoyed this one, Well done
Write on...
DINY
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This was very good
the story the rythum the ryhme the meter were all excellant
The only suggestion I may have is to put spaces between the stanzas, like every sixth line, in this one, you sould even break it up into efvery third line
But the structure is the least of your worries,
I enjoyed this one, Well done
Write on...
DINY
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from WARRIORPRINCESS
This is a fine piece of work, there should be more of it on FS. A good read, (makes a change from the other in depth stuff I've seen today).
Nice flow and rhythm.
Well worked out poem, one to be proud of.
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This is a fine piece of work, there should be more of it on FS. A good read, (makes a change from the other in depth stuff I've seen today).
Nice flow and rhythm.
Well worked out poem, one to be proud of.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2005
Comment from WritePoeticSorceress
I literally gasped at the end of this one. This is one of the best story poems I have ever read. I am definitly on your fan list now so I can be sure to read the rest of your work. Keep Writing!
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I literally gasped at the end of this one. This is one of the best story poems I have ever read. I am definitly on your fan list now so I can be sure to read the rest of your work. Keep Writing!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2005
Comment from Moonchild28
I really like your poem. It kept my interst from beginning to end. The flow was good which made the reading enjoyable. Their destiny was to have eternal love.
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I really like your poem. It kept my interst from beginning to end. The flow was good which made the reading enjoyable. Their destiny was to have eternal love.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2005
