Leave me alone. 112 words
Most of the fear is in the early stages.14 total reviews
Comment from Rose Hearth
You have described the early stages of Alzheimer's from the patient's point of view quite well. The fear in this stage often comes out as anger and hostility.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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You have described the early stages of Alzheimer's from the patient's point of view quite well. The fear in this stage often comes out as anger and hostility.
Comment Written 07-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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pnal experience. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from nancyjam
This is so sad to see it from the
patients point of view. How frustrating that
must be.
You present it so well in this poem.
Very good rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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This is so sad to see it from the
patients point of view. How frustrating that
must be.
You present it so well in this poem.
Very good rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 07-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from kleinifer
The conversational lines hit me in a good way!
Ideas can be interpreted in different ways; but when you are speaking from a first person point of view, the effect is more intense - as this poem suggests =)
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reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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The conversational lines hit me in a good way!
Ideas can be interpreted in different ways; but when you are speaking from a first person point of view, the effect is more intense - as this poem suggests =)
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Comment Written 07-May-2012
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Thank you for reviewing. This was a reality for my sister and I.
Comment from Bina1
A very nice poem about a heartbreaking situation. No one wins in this battle. Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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A very nice poem about a heartbreaking situation. No one wins in this battle. Thank you for sharing, good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Thank you for reviewing. We went through this stage with my mother.
