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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from jclark
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Another good "appetizer" for what is next to come. Glad to see the bad guys getting what they deserve. Have fun with the kitties..they are adorable.
Judy

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


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Comment from WilliamDeen
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Good work, Barbara. Well penned and a good continuation of the story. Good descriptions and dialogue. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


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Comment from Gert sherwood
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HI Barb another virtual 6 rating from me until I'm allowed to give you the rating you deserve
As usual a great chapter and you had me still in tension about Anna's recovery


Gert

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


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    Thank you for the virtual six. I appreciate it and your kind review.
Comment from tinams
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This really is a wonderful story and it is very well written Barbara. It was a compelling read from start to finish. Well done :) Tina

 Comment Written 08-May-2012


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Comment from jadapenn
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Hi Barbie, I've been having some computer trouble so only got to read you now. This seems to be an annual plague with these stupid computers. Nice chapter and at last the wait is over. Liked the bit with Troy talking to Anna. luv jada

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Comment from ScarletClearwater
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I liked the ending and the excitement about the bad guys and their chop shop. It was a good, clean professional write. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Comment from katmckeown
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Where I have not read you earlier works, I can see the foreshadowing you are developing in your plot. The characters appear to have strong qualities.

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Comment from Mishelly
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This was a great read. I've missed a few posts along the way but am still able to follow the story which is a credit to you. The last post I read, Anna was still alright so it was a shock to read she is now in the hospital. I found Troy's concerns believable, and I was right there with him as he worried about Anna. I do believe the relationship between Troy and Anna classifies this as a romance. Especially since Troy said those three little words at the end. I'm sure there are many readers who have been waiting for that. Another job well done.

 Comment Written 07-May-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from JW
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Hmm. After reading this chapter I'm not sure if l'm happy or not. It's good to see that the code blue was not for Anna. However, her being in a coma isn't particularly good.

You did a great job writing this first part. JW


 Comment Written 07-May-2012


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Comment from Shirley McLain
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Great chapter and I know all about kittens and computer keyboards. I have a little one that I bottle fed and I can't keep him off of my keyboard.

 Comment Written 07-May-2012


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