I Thank You For Leaving
I've learned to thank a terrible breakup.2 total reviews
Comment from Tinamaria Penn
Very great 5-7-5 poem. Good use of vocabulary within the 5-7-5 writing requirement which addresses a serious subject matter. The tone of your poem is very hopeful. Great work.
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Very great 5-7-5 poem. Good use of vocabulary within the 5-7-5 writing requirement which addresses a serious subject matter. The tone of your poem is very hopeful. Great work.
Comment Written 02-May-2012
Comment from Starlit Ink
The feeling of letting go is brutal, but once you do, it is a relief. Such powerful emotion in such few words. Chains untie but leave scars, and your reader is left with sharing that emotion. Good luck in the contest.
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The feeling of letting go is brutal, but once you do, it is a relief. Such powerful emotion in such few words. Chains untie but leave scars, and your reader is left with sharing that emotion. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2012
