Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

I confess that I'm not a great fan of these repeating forms.

However I admire the delicate elegance of this write with its lovely end rhyme and its alliterative touches.

Reminds me of the pellucid waters of the Caribbean islands where the sea creatures swim above white coral sand while the sea breeze ruffles the palms.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Thanks for best wishes.

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

robina1978, I could never accomplish a poem as suxh, nor would I even try, for my head would be swimming. Perfection truly. It will do very well in this contest. Best wishes. I absoluitely loved it.. jlsavell

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from amada

Excellent

"Swimming freely in a sunlit sea scheme..." This is a very good phrase. This is just a wonderful mermaid tale. The artwork is great as well.

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 04-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

Great presentation Robina! Gorgeous image to support your very well written poem...

The sea is magical, beauty supreme
Enchanting colors bedazzle blue-green
Floating effortlessly on the Gulf stream

Like this beautiful verse... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

 Comment Written 02-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from elgone

Excellent

Interesting form very well executed for this poem. I enjoyed reading it. It flowed very well. I think I have always enjoyed the idea of mermaids but they are one fantasy being I have not written about.

E

 Comment Written 02-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. You could always consider, but maybe more a female thing.

Comment from pharp

Exceptional

Oh my goodness!!! Awesome, this poem did it for me. The artwork selected captured the message within this poem. The flow and rhyming scheme right on point. The first and last stanza well delivered. Enjoyed the read. Exceptionally done! Bravo!

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Glad you enjoyed it so much and thanks for the lovely 6.

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

WOW....Robina LOVE IT its beautiful it wont let me give a six..sorry. yuea, real pretty. Wonderful poem of the mirmaid love Michael

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

Your poem is lovely, your description of the work it took makes me dizzy! Thank you for sharing your lovely lines, the art work is beautiful.

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from mermaids

Exceptional

I enjoyed reading this poem about a lovely mermaid. You capture the myth and essence of this sea creature. Vivid images come to mind as I read your words.

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Nic-namesake-that you also enjoyed it so much. Thanks ever so much for the gorgeous six.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Great job on this one Ine.
It flowed well, had great imagery, and emotion with the over all well rhymed and paced work.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine