Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

SHORT CHAPTER BUT RIVETING. YOUR NARRATIVE OF THE ACTION WAS EXCELLENT, SAND THE WORRY, DOUBTS AND FEARS OF THE LIVING OVER THE INJURIES INCURRED BY ANNA, IS AN EXCELLENT HOOK TO FOCUS THE READERS ATTENTION ON THE FORTHCOMING CHAPTER. KUDOS!

TAKE CARE,

RAY

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND REVIEW AND YOUR ENCOURAGING WORDS.

Comment from JW

Excellent

This is a good addition to your story. However, I was a bit puzzled by the doctor's use of a pager. Do doctor's still use pagers these days, instead of smart phones?

Either way, good job. One cannot help but wonder what's next. JW

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

My oncologist still uses a pager. Maybe he's old fashioned. Thank you for the kind review,

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

Wow, you did a great job. I didn't see any nits this time and evil Eddie didn't pop in either.
At first I was reading and thought I read it before, which I did. But then I saw you were just leaving off for effect. Nice job again
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by bookishfabler on 24-Apr-2012

you're welcome

Comment from Allison78

Excellent

I think this is another great chapter and you have kept the momentum going really well. You leave me each week not wanting to wait for the next one. Well done!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from squid152

Excellent

I am just joining the story. But what I can tell you is the way that you write, appears to the reader, like it is happening now.-Squid

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Well Barbara
Anna suffered a terrible amount of abuse at the bastards hands. It is a good thing a bullet to the head, it saves the county and state a ton of money to house, feed, and educate him. Bobby is dead. Let's hear it for DEAD!!!
Bear

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Cobalt Blue

Excellent

I think this is the third installment I have read now so I am starting to pick up on the story line. It is making for a good read. The character development is very interesting. You write well, carrying the story forward at a good pace. No spags seen at all. Good writing!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Wow! At last that pig Bobby is taken out and I love this Idea. He should have died long ago. Barbara this was an absolutely magic part chapter. Well done!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

barbara:

It is absolutely horrifying when everything within your
soul is screaming that something bad is going to happen
and there's not a darn thing you can do about it. As a
school administrator, I've seen the train wreck coming
but because no one had broken any laws yet, nothing could
be done

thank you for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

The medical trauma assessment in this chapter was a chilling testimony of the extent of the abuse and how quickly and how devistating it can all happen. told with grisk pace and thorough realism. Powerful write.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012

Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.