Dracula
A Minute poem28 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Ah, you sucked me in with this one, ine. The rhyme and flow are excellent, and it does indeed move like clockwork. You present the temptation made by the vampire very well. If only something could be done about that aging and fading he assures the woman she will face, and of course Dracula has just the cure. You really pulled this one off--great handling of the subject matter and precision rhyme and meter. Six stars! judi
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Ah, you sucked me in with this one, ine. The rhyme and flow are excellent, and it does indeed move like clockwork. You present the temptation made by the vampire very well. If only something could be done about that aging and fading he assures the woman she will face, and of course Dracula has just the cure. You really pulled this one off--great handling of the subject matter and precision rhyme and meter. Six stars! judi
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Glad you liked it so much worthy a six. Thanks again, made my day.
Comment from LilHippie
Oh my favorite creatures of the creepy night, vampires. Great poem, great feeling in it. they are the sexiest and most romantic of all evil creatures. And my favorite will start a new season this summer, True Blood. Are you a fan? Your poem is well written, the photo is awesome, and of course the black background is perfect. You speak for the vampire who must have his lady, and she is willing, I presume, they are just so convincing in their appeal, aren't they. If you are a True Blood fan, know this, Eric can bite me any time he wishes!!!! Thanks for a creepy fun start to my day.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Oh my favorite creatures of the creepy night, vampires. Great poem, great feeling in it. they are the sexiest and most romantic of all evil creatures. And my favorite will start a new season this summer, True Blood. Are you a fan? Your poem is well written, the photo is awesome, and of course the black background is perfect. You speak for the vampire who must have his lady, and she is willing, I presume, they are just so convincing in their appeal, aren't they. If you are a True Blood fan, know this, Eric can bite me any time he wishes!!!! Thanks for a creepy fun start to my day.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This poem is perfect in every shape and form. I always admire the work that goes into syllable counts having never mastered the art myself, I respect those who do it well. It is beautifully presented and the striking artwork you have chosen complements the words perfectly.
Well deserving of six stars. :-)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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This poem is perfect in every shape and form. I always admire the work that goes into syllable counts having never mastered the art myself, I respect those who do it well. It is beautifully presented and the striking artwork you have chosen complements the words perfectly.
Well deserving of six stars. :-)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Glad you enjoyed it so much and found it worthy a six. I find these very hard and usually have to take very long to make them. But I took classes from Brooke twice, that did wonders. Thanks again for the 6.
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It was well worthy, I wish I could have given it more!!
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I wondered about that last night as the Fanart site has a far more gradual rating.
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful minute poem. Nice flow and beautiful rhyme.
I'm impressed by your well chosen words. It's one of your best I think. You deserved the six stars, my friend. Liefs Fia
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Wonderful minute poem. Nice flow and beautiful rhyme.
I'm impressed by your well chosen words. It's one of your best I think. You deserved the six stars, my friend. Liefs Fia
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Thanks so much Fia, glad you liked it and you know I love sixes like most- I hope. Thanks again.
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You're welcome Ine. You deserved it. Have a nice Sunday too. Fia
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Ine, A great Black and White picture to complement a very dramatic poem. It is good to read something that I can get my teeth into!!
Your syllable count is spot on as usual. Thank you for sharing. wiljacro.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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HI! Ine, A great Black and White picture to complement a very dramatic poem. It is good to read something that I can get my teeth into!!
Your syllable count is spot on as usual. Thank you for sharing. wiljacro.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine
Comment from October21
A well written poem. The format seems tough, but you managed to do it flawlessly. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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A well written poem. The format seems tough, but you managed to do it flawlessly. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine
Comment from misscookie
As much as I enjoyed your poiem
the time was not write because its stilldark outside even though its 4:45 AM.
But I was brave and finish your blooody poem to the end.
all kinding aside this was a good wtrite.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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As much as I enjoyed your poiem
the time was not write because its stilldark outside even though its 4:45 AM.
But I was brave and finish your blooody poem to the end.
all kinding aside this was a good wtrite.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine. It is morning here.
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It was my pleasure, until next time.
Comment from Melspoems
Wow, this a great minute poem Ine.
Seems as really written by a vampire talking to the one he loves and wants to make immortal.
Syllable count and rhymes are perfect.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Wow, this a great minute poem Ine.
Seems as really written by a vampire talking to the one he loves and wants to make immortal.
Syllable count and rhymes are perfect.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a very nice Sunday and take care, Ine
