Alleys
Story of a woman living on the street.31 total reviews
Comment from tinams
I liked what I read, the descriptions were good, but I was a bit confused as to if it was finished or not? I also found a couple of typos:
'Leight finally had found her new home' - Should read Leigh
'searched for a shildter from the elements' - should read 'shelter' I presume
Tina :)
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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I liked what I read, the descriptions were good, but I was a bit confused as to if it was finished or not? I also found a couple of typos:
'Leight finally had found her new home' - Should read Leigh
'searched for a shildter from the elements' - should read 'shelter' I presume
Tina :)
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2012
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No, this is not finished, not even half way. I accidently posted it prematurally. Linda
