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My thoughts on true love.
2 total reviews
Comment from
P1
this is a really good piece of writing
i enjoyed every word of it
i am sorry but i dont get the 5 7 5
what am i missing. however in its own
right it is well worth taking the time out
to read. thanks
Comment Written 13-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
Thank you so much for your review. And just between us I don't see how I followed the 5 7 5 syllable poetry format. But I won't tell if you don't!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
Thank you so much for your review. And just between us I don't see how I followed the 5 7 5 syllable poetry format. But I won't tell if you don't!
Comment from
artemis53
Interesting take, Maria. It's almost an 'approach avoidance' philosophy. You've brought up valid points. I feel that love doesn't have to be explained as long as devotion comes with it. Very good read!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
Your comments were quite inspiring. That is what I wanted - everyone to have their own take. Thank you for sharing yours.
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