Comment from mr elis

Good

Survive,is a must,it-can be-seeing-in human being as-well as-in-animals-when we start to feel hungry our five senses are out of control, the animals having no other alternative just set out to look for food.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2012

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Comment from justchillin

Excellent

You have managed to capture alliteration perfectly in your poem, with a clever story too. Great description and imagery bring this to life. Well done, very enjoyable

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2012

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

I like how the s(es) slither through this one. Can almost hear a hiss. You added even another twist in the last line. Looks like a winner to me and I wish you well with it.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2012

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Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Okay you got me and I'm not a fan of overused alliteration. Yes. The snake lucked out this time and won't have to go hunting for his meals.

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2012

Thanks for reading and reviewing.