The Church Ladies
Sunday, Sunday ...41 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I completely understand and I wish I didn't. I am known for never knowing where I put my keys. I enjoyed reading your short story.
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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I completely understand and I wish I didn't. I am known for never knowing where I put my keys. I enjoyed reading your short story.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 10-May-2012
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Hi there!! Such great thoughts. And I so appreciate them, and your time for me. I do apologize for more late thank you's...hugs for sticking with me...xoxo! Susan
Comment from robina1978
Great dedication to Misscookie, I am sure she will like it. Love the accent you used. For two church ladies they use some bad language when stressed-LOL. Funny: the dialogues, the glasses and then the car keys. Real Flash.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Great dedication to Misscookie, I am sure she will like it. Love the accent you used. For two church ladies they use some bad language when stressed-LOL. Funny: the dialogues, the glasses and then the car keys. Real Flash.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Hi Ine! THank you and so glad you enjoyed this. I do hope you're okay, my back is just killing me. It's always something! Thanks and hugs!! Susan
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Sorry, I am slowly improving.
Comment from reconciled
Good morning Susan...(LOL) love your story...and relate to it. I lose my car keys, or phone or my head on a regular basis.Okay got to go work. love Michael
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Good morning Susan...(LOL) love your story...and relate to it. I lose my car keys, or phone or my head on a regular basis.Okay got to go work. love Michael
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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HA! ME too! I lose keys, cell phone, lose track of where I sit a glass of pop. Lose my darn tools. I can't stand it! BUT, it's funny when others do it! I'm bad. SO glad you liked this!! hug! Susan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Of course it's funny, Suse. I've spent hours looking for things I've set down in a moment of distraction and forgotten about. It's my second biggest time-waster, the first being trying to remember where I've put things so that I'd know just where they are. I've done this since I was a kid. It's only gotten worse with age. :) nancy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Of course it's funny, Suse. I've spent hours looking for things I've set down in a moment of distraction and forgotten about. It's my second biggest time-waster, the first being trying to remember where I've put things so that I'd know just where they are. I've done this since I was a kid. It's only gotten worse with age. :) nancy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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HI all! More tardy thanks! I am so sorry. I had another injection, they are not really helping. I do so much appreciate your reading this and taking a minute to send me a note!! Love and hugs!!! Susan
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Realist! This is a great story! I love these ladies. You could write a whole novel about them and I'd lap it all up :) I thought you were going to say she had the glasses on her head. Isn't that usually the case lol. After finding the glasses the car keys were missing. That is too funny!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Hi Realist! This is a great story! I love these ladies. You could write a whole novel about them and I'd lap it all up :) I thought you were going to say she had the glasses on her head. Isn't that usually the case lol. After finding the glasses the car keys were missing. That is too funny!!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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HI all! More tardy thanks! I am so sorry. I had another injection, they are not really helping. I do so much appreciate your reading this and taking a minute to send me a note!! Love and hugs!!! Susan
Comment from misscookie
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That I mean from my hear.
I love the artwork you picked for your poem. I love the way you express what does on with the sisters on Sunday. They are blessed because this goes on with me more days and time I trhink?
I thank you I honored for you to deciate this poem to me. you got my number perfectly.
Thank you my friend and thank you for sharing this truly mad my day.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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That I mean from my hear.
I love the artwork you picked for your poem. I love the way you express what does on with the sisters on Sunday. They are blessed because this goes on with me more days and time I trhink?
I thank you I honored for you to deciate this poem to me. you got my number perfectly.
Thank you my friend and thank you for sharing this truly mad my day.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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I don't think I've ever had that many stars! WOW! SO glad you liked this. I am so sorry for not getting back to you sooner too. My back is shot. I need to be shot. I ain't good for nothing now. I am just absolutely thrilled that you liked this my dear friend. LOVE and hugs! Always, Susan
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My back is acting up for a few days now, I know the feeling. take a chill pill and cool your heels listen top your body. Hey If your work is good. And uit is you deserve the stars.
Comment from missy98writer
Susan.,
This is wonderfully written with excellent dialogue of two aged sisters. The art work is priceless. This is me if I live to be older, I'm luck I live to be 50, 60 or more, but I plan to go out kicking and screaming. May finally found her glasses, but now has lost the danged car keys. I absouletly loved your dialogue rich story. Bravo, my friend. I immensely enjoy your great narrative voice and rich, detailed writing. In 350 (?) words you managed to established a setting, conflict, and a resolution to your well composed flash fiction. I'd recommend your outstanding story to other reviewers. Nice day to you, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Susan.,
This is wonderfully written with excellent dialogue of two aged sisters. The art work is priceless. This is me if I live to be older, I'm luck I live to be 50, 60 or more, but I plan to go out kicking and screaming. May finally found her glasses, but now has lost the danged car keys. I absouletly loved your dialogue rich story. Bravo, my friend. I immensely enjoy your great narrative voice and rich, detailed writing. In 350 (?) words you managed to established a setting, conflict, and a resolution to your well composed flash fiction. I'd recommend your outstanding story to other reviewers. Nice day to you, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Dear Melissa...As onery and spunky as you are, I think you will be here to keep me going for a real long time. I so hope. God love you. I am so happy when you like these tales of mine. I love that photo. It is priceless. I wish I could talk to those two! Wouldn't they be fun? Thank you Melissa. Get lots of rest! hug! Susan
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I slept from 12 till 5am then I woke in pain & a migraine headache feeling putrid. I'll call you later in the day. I'm taking two Ultrum and get off the computer. This story rocked.
Melissa
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Sunday's were so pleasant << No apostrophe in Sundays
Except for that error, which you will surely correct asap, this is well written and clever. Very sweet story that makes us love these two ladies. The ending is absolutely perfect!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Sunday's were so pleasant << No apostrophe in Sundays
Except for that error, which you will surely correct asap, this is well written and clever. Very sweet story that makes us love these two ladies. The ending is absolutely perfect!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Phyllis! I changed 'damned' to 'confounded'? What do you think? I have known folks to swear some, even tho they do go to church? I'm so glad you liked this, and do value your opinion! Thank you and yes, I will go fix that apostrophe too! hug, Susan
Comment from Trybuck
I don't believe the language is typical of the elder church ladies but everything else probably is. The sad thing is, we don't have to be old to forget or lose the little things.
Very well written, Buck
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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I don't believe the language is typical of the elder church ladies but everything else probably is. The sad thing is, we don't have to be old to forget or lose the little things.
Very well written, Buck
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Buck...I think I will change damn to darn. I thought that as I wrote. BUT, I have known several devout church people who swore like sailors...honest. I'm happy you enjoyed this...I love that photo! Thank you for being here Buck. Susan
Comment from psalmist
Although not quite as old as the pair in the picture, I can certainly relate to their predicament. A cute story. Excellent physical descriptions of the sisters: the tall almost domineering elder, and the short, busy younger. Also, I can "hear" their voices in my head. One deeper, more authoritative, the other high and squeaky. Great job.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Although not quite as old as the pair in the picture, I can certainly relate to their predicament. A cute story. Excellent physical descriptions of the sisters: the tall almost domineering elder, and the short, busy younger. Also, I can "hear" their voices in my head. One deeper, more authoritative, the other high and squeaky. Great job.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi there! I know, me too. I lose EVERYTHING! It's just not fun...lol! I'm just tickled that you enjoyed this...I need to learn dialogue and lighten up too a little bit. Happy weekend...Susan
