Good Friday
A Cinquain171 total reviews
Comment from Maustin
A very impactful work of what Good Friday embodies. You illustrated it nicely with powerful emotion. The artwork is beautiful. Your work is extremely moving. Recommended read.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A very impactful work of what Good Friday embodies. You illustrated it nicely with powerful emotion. The artwork is beautiful. Your work is extremely moving. Recommended read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Maustin, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this Good Friday Cinquain :-) Brooke
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so welcome Brooke.
Comment from IndianaIrish
A beautifully written Cinquain for Good Friday, Brooke. I loved your use of "new breath" and the meaning it has for all of us. Happy Easter!
Karyn :>)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A beautifully written Cinquain for Good Friday, Brooke. I loved your use of "new breath" and the meaning it has for all of us. Happy Easter!
Karyn :>)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Karyn, thank you so very much for your most thoughtful review, my friend. Happy Easter to you and yours :-) Brooke
Comment from Larrypic11
I feel like a sycophant in my praise for your work, Brooke. I just can't say enough how the simplicity and eloquence touches me, while you challenge your intellect to express in a specific style. It astounds me, but more importantly, move me. Happy Easter, and renewal to you. Larry
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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I feel like a sycophant in my praise for your work, Brooke. I just can't say enough how the simplicity and eloquence touches me, while you challenge your intellect to express in a specific style. It astounds me, but more importantly, move me. Happy Easter, and renewal to you. Larry
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Larry, thank you so very much, my most encouraging and gracious friend :-) Happy Easter to you and all those you love, too. Brooke
Comment from cathcartgirl
Brooke, looks like you followed the Cinquain perfectly. I never knew there were so many different kinds of poems.
Very appropriate for this Easter Season. I am so glad that Christ's death wasn't the end of the story!
Eileen
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Brooke, looks like you followed the Cinquain perfectly. I never knew there were so many different kinds of poems.
Very appropriate for this Easter Season. I am so glad that Christ's death wasn't the end of the story!
Eileen
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Eileen, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this Good Friday cinquain. Brooke :-)
Comment from mgarreau
Thank you for this lovely and meaningful Cinquain. This message for Good Friday is well stated and so true. I really like how lines 3 and 5 rhyme giving it a nice flow. Thank you for sharing.
~Marie
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Thank you for this lovely and meaningful Cinquain. This message for Good Friday is well stated and so true. I really like how lines 3 and 5 rhyme giving it a nice flow. Thank you for sharing.
~Marie
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Marie, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review. I truly appreciate your gracious comments and generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Pearly One,
A blessed day to you. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful poem which is so appropriate as we remember the death and resurrection of the Christ. I felt "breath" was the perfect way to describe this event. My thoughts have been much on breath lately too.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hi Pearly One,
A blessed day to you. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful poem which is so appropriate as we remember the death and resurrection of the Christ. I felt "breath" was the perfect way to describe this event. My thoughts have been much on breath lately too.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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whizpurr, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I liked your poem and think you did a great job with it. I wouldn't change a thing. The colors, the flow of your poem, it's just perfect.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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I liked your poem and think you did a great job with it. I wouldn't change a thing. The colors, the flow of your poem, it's just perfect.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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WIVA, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Bellringer
Brooke, this is a stunning and powerful witness of faith in Christ's work through His earthly life, His willing sacrifice, the "breath" of the Holy Spirit on the Apostles and those in the Upper room, and the glorious resurrection of our savior. As you say in your closing lines, the death of Christ for sinners/believers is the heart of the gospel. Thank you for "bearing witness." Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Brooke, this is a stunning and powerful witness of faith in Christ's work through His earthly life, His willing sacrifice, the "breath" of the Holy Spirit on the Apostles and those in the Upper room, and the glorious resurrection of our savior. As you say in your closing lines, the death of Christ for sinners/believers is the heart of the gospel. Thank you for "bearing witness." Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hector, thank you so very much, my friend, for your most thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
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You're most welcome, Brooke. warmly, Hector
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Brooke, not being able to write them myself, I've been waiting for poems on Lent, Good Friday and Easter. So glad to finally find this cinquain. A few words that say a lot. I ponder on the last two lines quite long ...:) Great Job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hi, Brooke, not being able to write them myself, I've been waiting for poems on Lent, Good Friday and Easter. So glad to finally find this cinquain. A few words that say a lot. I ponder on the last two lines quite long ...:) Great Job.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Belinda, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke Now I need to think of something for Easter.
Comment from Dave M
Brooke,
This is an excellent poem in honor of Good Friday. I appreciated this post and found nothing to criticize. I've heard that Roman Catholics are focused on the Sacrifice, Protestants on the Resurrection.
Dave
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Brooke,
This is an excellent poem in honor of Good Friday. I appreciated this post and found nothing to criticize. I've heard that Roman Catholics are focused on the Sacrifice, Protestants on the Resurrection.
Dave
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Dave, I had not heard that - I am Presbyterian/Protestant, and I think we honor a good balance of sacrifice and resurrection Thanks so much for your review :-) Brooke
