Good Friday
A Cinquain171 total reviews
Comment from justchillin
Very powerful message here, on this historic day. Talented work in your poem. Sadly all of it true. Thank you for sharing this. Well done
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Very powerful message here, on this historic day. Talented work in your poem. Sadly all of it true. Thank you for sharing this. Well done
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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justchillin, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from pharp
Excellent! Powerful poem reflecting the death and resurrection. I enjoyed the read. It's amazing how very few words can bring out a powerful message. Great Job
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Excellent! Powerful poem reflecting the death and resurrection. I enjoyed the read. It's amazing how very few words can bring out a powerful message. Great Job
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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pharp, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from nancyjam
a perfect Cinquain for today with a
beautiful message wrapped up in
your lines.
If we don't die we won't "live" for
eternity. Christ taught by example.
Have a Blessed Easter, Brooke.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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a perfect Cinquain for today with a
beautiful message wrapped up in
your lines.
If we don't die we won't "live" for
eternity. Christ taught by example.
Have a Blessed Easter, Brooke.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Nancy, I wish you a Blessed Easter to. Thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobbi22
While the resurrection is the ultimate celebration in Christianity, it is important to remember the suffering and death that came first. Very well written.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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While the resurrection is the ultimate celebration in Christianity, it is important to remember the suffering and death that came first. Very well written.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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RightPics, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from RebelRose
The truth in black and white ... both literally and figuratively. Beautifully done and a joy to read and review. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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The truth in black and white ... both literally and figuratively. Beautifully done and a joy to read and review. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Patty, thanks so very much for your thoughtful response to this Good Friday cinquain :-) Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke your lines
hope revived by new breath --
we're called to bear witness that first
came death.
to me is saying when Christ took his last breath it was a sign that his death freed us from sin?
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hello Brooke your lines
hope revived by new breath --
we're called to bear witness that first
came death.
to me is saying when Christ took his last breath it was a sign that his death freed us from sin?
Gert
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Gert, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from HPicasso
A perfect cinquain. Great content and great poem.
Not only is it a relative topic but it is one point and directive without and superflous words. Your author's notes are very informative. We all know the glory and goodness that came from Jesus rising from the dead.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A perfect cinquain. Great content and great poem.
Not only is it a relative topic but it is one point and directive without and superflous words. Your author's notes are very informative. We all know the glory and goodness that came from Jesus rising from the dead.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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HPicasso, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good point! There'd be no miracle resurrection if it weren't for Good Friday. I always thought of this as a sad day, but when you realize it was what cleansed our sins, then it's not so sad... not for us, anyway. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Good point! There'd be no miracle resurrection if it weren't for Good Friday. I always thought of this as a sad day, but when you realize it was what cleansed our sins, then it's not so sad... not for us, anyway. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Phyllis, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this Good Friday cinquain :-) Brooke
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Brooke,
This is a superb cinquain for Good Friday. You have told a complete story about His death and resurrection. Only a poet with your skills could have chosen the perfect words to do that. Bravo!! ****** Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hi Brooke,
This is a superb cinquain for Good Friday. You have told a complete story about His death and resurrection. Only a poet with your skills could have chosen the perfect words to do that. Bravo!! ****** Blessings, chey
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Chey, thank you so very much for your lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from Adam J Santos
Brooke, This is wonderful Cinquain for Good friday. A great reminder that even in death there is life. Well done... Good friday to you and have a great Easter... Take care Adam:)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
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Brooke, This is wonderful Cinquain for Good friday. A great reminder that even in death there is life. Well done... Good friday to you and have a great Easter... Take care Adam:)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
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Adam, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
