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Good Friday

A Cinquain

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Comment from Tengeresz
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Hi

Emperor Constantine had a dream the night before a battle. With this cross you will concur. That message changed the Eastern Roman Empire and the world. Who knew at the time that a fringe Jewish sect would find a home in the Gentile community and would become one of the worlds major religions.

Tengeresz

Tengeresz

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Tengeresz, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
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Thank you for sharing! It is nice to think beyond Easter egg hunts and chocolate ! Have a lovely Easter. This is a lovely poem!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Bina, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review, and I hope you have a wonderful Easter too :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Very nice! It is hard to say
so much in so few words but
you certainly managed in this
cinquain. The picture is as
simple as the poem. Well done, Nancy

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Nancy, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This well-written poem is a reminder to all that--as we celebrate the glory of the Resurrection--we must not forget what happened prior to it, Jesus's sacrifice for all. Very good

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
    Janice, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from AprilShower
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Yes. Before we can be resurrected, we must die. I like this type of poem. You did well with it. It has a great message. Thank you for sharing it. It looks like it would be fun to write. :o) April

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
    April, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is the best one I have read today for Good Friday. So many do not understand the true meaning of today. Your lovely words touched me. Thank you! xsx

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Thank you so very much, sandra - I truly appreciate your insightful reading of my poem and your gracious exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Doc Holiday
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Well-written Cinquain poem.
We all celebrate the resuurection.
We all know the glory and goodness that came from Jesus rising from the dead.

But before we can celebrate His new life, we need to bear witness of His death.

A moving tribute the marked day of His death, Good Friday!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
    Doc, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this Cinquain :-) Brooke
Comment from percival86jack
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A beautiful written on this Good Friday morn. For all those with faith, a solemn day before the day of resurrection. Happy Easter, Brooke... hugs, Jack xxxxxxx

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Jack, thank you so very much, my friend. A happy Easter to you and your family too :-) Brooke
Comment from Chris Tee
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Your cinquain is absolutely powerful and true to form with your author's notes are very informative Brook. Well done with this splendid gem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Chris, thank you for your positive review of this Cinquain. Brooke
Comment from Jami Lynn
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Very current poem, since today is the day. Not only is it a relative topic but it is one point and very directive without and superfluous words. Great content and great poem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
    Thank you, Jami Lynn, for your thoughtful response to this Good Friday cinquain :-) Brooke