Day Closes Up Her Shop
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Comment from Alan K Pease
Fortunately we are a sphere that revolves so it is us who see that the sun or others stars at the beginning and end of each day. Actually the sun revolves around us and the world is flat like a shelf. A lot of people have tried to prove that this is right.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Fortunately we are a sphere that revolves so it is us who see that the sun or others stars at the beginning and end of each day. Actually the sun revolves around us and the world is flat like a shelf. A lot of people have tried to prove that this is right.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Alan, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You just made my day. I loved this poem and want to give you a six but FS says no. I so don't like playing by these rulles. XXXXXX As close to six stars as I can ge.
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You just made my day. I loved this poem and want to give you a six but FS says no. I so don't like playing by these rulles. XXXXXX As close to six stars as I can ge.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Barbara, thank you so very much for your gracious wish for an exceptional rating and for your lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Brooke. I'd like to shop in the couple's shop! This is so imaginative, Brooke, it makes me smile while enjoying your lines and rhymes. I bet Rags Auggie would feel the same with me. And yes, it is a glorious photo of sunset.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Hi, Brooke. I'd like to shop in the couple's shop! This is so imaginative, Brooke, it makes me smile while enjoying your lines and rhymes. I bet Rags Auggie would feel the same with me. And yes, it is a glorious photo of sunset.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Belinda, thank you so very much for your wonderful review :-) Brooke
Comment from bard owl
Your version of the vibrantly strong sun is my idea of his overpowering presence that will not be "consigned to shelves designed for storing. Excellent imagery in this one and of course, the flawless rhythm and rhyme I so love. Exceptional - if only I had six stars to give you. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Your version of the vibrantly strong sun is my idea of his overpowering presence that will not be "consigned to shelves designed for storing. Excellent imagery in this one and of course, the flawless rhythm and rhyme I so love. Exceptional - if only I had six stars to give you. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much, Linda, for your gracious wish for an exceptional rating and for your gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from uniqueauthor
This is a beautiful poem and the gorgeous picture only compliments the work. It is ture that sun does not waste upon the shelf, because when the sun set here tonight, it will rise somewhere else. I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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This is a beautiful poem and the gorgeous picture only compliments the work. It is ture that sun does not waste upon the shelf, because when the sun set here tonight, it will rise somewhere else. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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uniqueauthor - thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You're welcome. Peace for today
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This was fabulous Brooke. It actually cheered me up too!
I have to get my butt off the shelf:) I really loved your imagery and how you created this around a "shop" idea. I loved it, great lyrical quality my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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This was fabulous Brooke. It actually cheered me up too!
I have to get my butt off the shelf:) I really loved your imagery and how you created this around a "shop" idea. I loved it, great lyrical quality my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Maureen, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a different look at night and day. The image of day opening and closing shop is an interesting perspective. Nicely written.
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This is a different look at night and day. The image of day opening and closing shop is an interesting perspective. Nicely written.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much, RightPics :-) Brooke
Comment from cathcartgirl
Beautiful story of a beautiful sunset. I just found outyou are a teacher. No wonder your poems are so good. I love to watch the sunsets at night, I am visiting in Phoenix and they are lovely here. Don't see much at home in Washington, too many tall trees!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Beautiful story of a beautiful sunset. I just found outyou are a teacher. No wonder your poems are so good. I love to watch the sunsets at night, I am visiting in Phoenix and they are lovely here. Don't see much at home in Washington, too many tall trees!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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cathcartgirl, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review : -) Brooke
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is just beautiful. Some of the best poetry I have read.
Splendid work that sings the song of beauty.
Day closes up her shop each night
but opens up each morning,
for Sun cannot be long consigned
to shelves designed for storing.
This is my favorite verse, though picking one was difficult...the whole thing is so perfect. I so admire your skills.
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This is just beautiful. Some of the best poetry I have read.
Splendid work that sings the song of beauty.
Day closes up her shop each night
but opens up each morning,
for Sun cannot be long consigned
to shelves designed for storing.
This is my favorite verse, though picking one was difficult...the whole thing is so perfect. I so admire your skills.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Sherry, thank you so very much for your gracious and encouraging comments and your wonderfully generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from JennyMoffat
great rhyming!! i like inventory and glory in particular. i enjoyed the crimson ink followed by the skies burning. this had a nice flow, well done!
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great rhyming!! i like inventory and glory in particular. i enjoyed the crimson ink followed by the skies burning. this had a nice flow, well done!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Jenny, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
