Whispers in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "SAVE THE DOGS by JAMES"Brook's best lead dog is struck deaf
36 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
This is a very well written chapter using many of our sense to bring the action alive, and much closer. By revealing James thoughts and emotions you pulled me into the story until I was fervently hoping for a good report from the Vet.
Liked the description of the vet, not typical of the type who would be there in an Alaskan setting.
Good writing, irish
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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This is a very well written chapter using many of our sense to bring the action alive, and much closer. By revealing James thoughts and emotions you pulled me into the story until I was fervently hoping for a good report from the Vet.
Liked the description of the vet, not typical of the type who would be there in an Alaskan setting.
Good writing, irish
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks a million, Irish. You inspire me to try to think of a good finish. Whew! Hope so. Marie
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is absolutely superb writing, Alaskastory. I admire anyone that can write young adult fiction with this kind of mastery. Your prose is clean and tight. Nothing is wasted, here. Superb story-telling skills and creation of characters that spark sympathy and interest. I will definitely keep following this story! Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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This is absolutely superb writing, Alaskastory. I admire anyone that can write young adult fiction with this kind of mastery. Your prose is clean and tight. Nothing is wasted, here. Superb story-telling skills and creation of characters that spark sympathy and interest. I will definitely keep following this story! Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Your compliments are most inspiring, Bev. Thanks a million for such a fine review and rating! Marie
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You're very welcome, Marie!
Comment from al1801
My first read of your story and I'm hooked. I live in a city in a land down under where snow is rare thus stories of dogs and sleds and snow attract me. Oh! how dogs are so relied on and what wonderful workers and companions they are. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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My first read of your story and I'm hooked. I live in a city in a land down under where snow is rare thus stories of dogs and sleds and snow attract me. Oh! how dogs are so relied on and what wonderful workers and companions they are. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for taking time to review this chapter. You have a knack for encouraging me. Marie
Comment from turtledove
Hi Alaskastory, I was simply amazed with the story. Can't wait to read more. This is new reading for me, as I have never ventured into Alaskan territory, really a shame since I am Canadian. Thank-you for the wonderful read and picture, I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Hope you don't mind if I join your fan club. Thank-you, turtledove :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Hi Alaskastory, I was simply amazed with the story. Can't wait to read more. This is new reading for me, as I have never ventured into Alaskan territory, really a shame since I am Canadian. Thank-you for the wonderful read and picture, I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Hope you don't mind if I join your fan club. Thank-you, turtledove :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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I love what we see of Canada along the Alcan route and I love your comments on this chapter. Thanks a million for reading this and reviewing. Marie
Comment from titanblack213
I like your writing. I think there is not much competition out
Who can write on this subject matter like you. Keep up the
Good work. And if you get time, can you let me know what you
Think of my writing?
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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I like your writing. I think there is not much competition out
Who can write on this subject matter like you. Keep up the
Good work. And if you get time, can you let me know what you
Think of my writing?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks for giving this chapter your time. I follow a few authors on Fanstory, but time keeps me limited. But I am sure to enjoy something you chose to post. Marie
Comment from bkbehera
It is an impressive and amusing chapter on animal lovers, particularly for domestic animals like dogs. Like human being animals have the right to enjoy life through various means, may be events like dogs race being organized by "North American Junior Championship Race" The author has nicely narrated about the health care of the dogs after the participation in the race was finished. Flow of facts was maintained steadily. Once the reader start the story feels to finish, with out stop.
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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It is an impressive and amusing chapter on animal lovers, particularly for domestic animals like dogs. Like human being animals have the right to enjoy life through various means, may be events like dogs race being organized by "North American Junior Championship Race" The author has nicely narrated about the health care of the dogs after the participation in the race was finished. Flow of facts was maintained steadily. Once the reader start the story feels to finish, with out stop.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thank you for reviewing and giving me such encouraging remarks.
