Fairy Magic
Making fairies angry may be a bad idea28 total reviews
Comment from asheagold
This is a nice fantasy poem, although it's too long for my taste. Sometimes the length takes away from the overall impact of the piece. Good rhyming pattern. The rhythm is fine too. Good job!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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This is a nice fantasy poem, although it's too long for my taste. Sometimes the length takes away from the overall impact of the piece. Good rhyming pattern. The rhythm is fine too. Good job!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked it.
Comment from titanblack213
I like this poem. It make's me wanna run outside in the sunnynfield's
And pick some flower's for my sister. Nevertheless, keep up the good
Work.
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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I like this poem. It make's me wanna run outside in the sunnynfield's
And pick some flower's for my sister. Nevertheless, keep up the good
Work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Thanks for reviewing. Why 3 stars? How could I improve it?
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your Fantasy Poem, Fairy Magic, is wonderful. I love the concept of little fairies. Your poem has an excellent rhyming scheme and the cadence is smooth and easy.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Your Fantasy Poem, Fairy Magic, is wonderful. I love the concept of little fairies. Your poem has an excellent rhyming scheme and the cadence is smooth and easy.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I'm so glad you liked my fairies. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from gazzagodbod
had to give this one a big sixer love the flow and the fantasy entwined with the real wonder of the garden fab thanks my friend gazzaxx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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had to give this one a big sixer love the flow and the fantasy entwined with the real wonder of the garden fab thanks my friend gazzaxx
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Wow! Six stars...Thanks! I'm so glad you liked my fairies.
Comment from Gungalo
Wow! A faery story that is great. No more of the dainty little thing flitting around. The story show them to be formidable to say the least.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Wow! A faery story that is great. No more of the dainty little thing flitting around. The story show them to be formidable to say the least.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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They're cute till you piss them off. You don't want to do that! I'm glad you liked my story poem. Thanks for reviewing.
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I can see that!!
Comment from FrankieW
Drinking the dew that shines like a gem,--good little descriptive "gem"
A terrific poem, all the different types of fairies and all the good work they do and WOW you wouldn't want to cross those busy fairies.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Drinking the dew that shines like a gem,--good little descriptive "gem"
A terrific poem, all the different types of fairies and all the good work they do and WOW you wouldn't want to cross those busy fairies.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I'm glad you liked my fairies. Nope, you sure don't want to cross them. Thanks for the stars.
Comment from percival86jack
"Making fairies angry may be a bad idea" Making fairies angry is DEFINITELY a bad idea! They had super powers you know and they're not all sweet and loveable! LOL Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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"Making fairies angry may be a bad idea" Making fairies angry is DEFINITELY a bad idea! They had super powers you know and they're not all sweet and loveable! LOL Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Oh, I know it's a bad idea. They're sweet and lovable till you piss them off. lol Glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Tonulak
In this poem, you've combined botany and love of flowers with Celtic magic to create a wonderful, fanciful world. There was also a strong narrative as you created the events of the forest fairy's world. nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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In this poem, you've combined botany and love of flowers with Celtic magic to create a wonderful, fanciful world. There was also a strong narrative as you created the events of the forest fairy's world. nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I'm so glad you liked my fairies. Thanks for your great review
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an excellent fairy tale, but a bit verbose for kiddies I think. The overall picture is lovely and is well written. Well done indeed with this work.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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This is an excellent fairy tale, but a bit verbose for kiddies I think. The overall picture is lovely and is well written. Well done indeed with this work.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I'm so glad you liked my fairies. Might have to read one fairy at a time for the really little kids. I just hope the poetry fairies aren't too upset cause I left them out. lol Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Herb
A nice piece of fairy whimsy. I liked how you described them and their activities, I'm not a big fan of such heavy rhyme, but that's just a taste thing.
Peter
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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A nice piece of fairy whimsy. I liked how you described them and their activities, I'm not a big fan of such heavy rhyme, but that's just a taste thing.
Peter
Comment Written 03-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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I'm glad you liked my descriptions of the little fairies. Thanks for reviewing.
