For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Easter at the Zoo"Poems about those winged gifts from above.
6 total reviews
Comment from poetstar
I just love sparrows. When my daughter was a toddler we used to sit on a patio and throw french fries to them. I love all the birds you mentioned in the poem. How empty our world would be without them. LoL Vonnie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2012
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I just love sparrows. When my daughter was a toddler we used to sit on a patio and throw french fries to them. I love all the birds you mentioned in the poem. How empty our world would be without them. LoL Vonnie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2012
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The six stars came through. You made my day, I had a very tough day at work and your encouraging words mean much to mean. Thanks again. Elaine
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I am so glad the stars came through. God bless you for working so hard to help others. You make my day with your bird poems. Love Your friend Vonnie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mermaids yes a very different Easter poem but I liked the poetic way to have fun at the zoo. Smiles to these lines--
a happy sparrow greets
visitors
the otter waits patiently
for the day to begin
chocolate eggs for humans
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Hello Mermaids yes a very different Easter poem but I liked the poetic way to have fun at the zoo. Smiles to these lines--
a happy sparrow greets
visitors
the otter waits patiently
for the day to begin
chocolate eggs for humans
Comment Written 31-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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I thought an unusual Easter poem would be fun. Thanks for a great
review. Elaine
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You are welcome
Gert
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smiles to you
Gert
Comment from bellemarie
Cute artwork. Refreshing since it is different for an Easter poem. It's an observation poem. Lots happening. I would have liked to see punctuation and some caps. (upper case) Wondering why you named the otter Fred. I would suggest a name that begins with O, like Okie or Ozzie.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Cute artwork. Refreshing since it is different for an Easter poem. It's an observation poem. Lots happening. I would have liked to see punctuation and some caps. (upper case) Wondering why you named the otter Fred. I would suggest a name that begins with O, like Okie or Ozzie.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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The name Fred just came out of me, it happens often when I write poetry. Thanks for reading and enjoying. ELaine
Comment from judiverse
Great enjoyment of spring expressed in your poem, mermaids. The animals seem to realize that spring has come. It's interesting that the sparrow brings the message of spring to the other animals. It's neat that you name the otter. It helps personalize him. The beavers and bears sense the coming of spring, and the actions of all the animals are cute. There's a feeling of celebration. judi
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Great enjoyment of spring expressed in your poem, mermaids. The animals seem to realize that spring has come. It's interesting that the sparrow brings the message of spring to the other animals. It's neat that you name the otter. It helps personalize him. The beavers and bears sense the coming of spring, and the actions of all the animals are cute. There's a feeling of celebration. judi
Comment Written 29-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from leejenkins67
I like this, it would be great turned into a children's book. I like how Fred seems to be the keeper of all the other animals. I feel the real message here is not Easter, but the welcome of spring.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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I like this, it would be great turned into a children's book. I like how Fred seems to be the keeper of all the other animals. I feel the real message here is not Easter, but the welcome of spring.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
Such a beautiful write Mermaids. It has the air about it to celebrate Easter at a zoo. You make all the animals and birds seem so content.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Such a beautiful write Mermaids. It has the air about it to celebrate Easter at a zoo. You make all the animals and birds seem so content.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012
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Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual Easter poem. Elaine
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LOL girl.
