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Campaign Trail: Never Say Never

An April Fool's Headline

16 total reviews 
Comment from c_lucas
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Clint Eastwood comes loaded with quips.Per se, North Korea pushes. Eastwood's "Make my Day," will put the little nation quivering in its boots. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    Thank you for a great review. :)
reply by c_lucas on 28-Mar-2012
    You're welcome.
Comment from ajdevore
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Cute. A little cynical, but cute. And I suppose we've all become a little cynical at this point. Dirty Harry would sure clean up the mess! Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the great review, ajdevore. :)
Comment from sky_faery
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Funny, funny! Very good tone, kept throughout. The first sentence was terrific, made me want to read until the end.

The only thing I would say is missing is that the article doesn't actually address what the title states, that the campaign slogan will be "Never Say Never." I think there could be a whole other humorous interlude with that. That or change the title. :)

Nice work!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    I may rework that. "Never Say Never" is the famous song by Justin Bieber. I was hoping it would stand out for itself. Thanks for the suggestion and for a great review. :)
reply by sky_faery on 28-Mar-2012
    No problem! You might want to position the new "slogan" (hilarious, btw) against Obama's last slogan, which was praised so highly. I think that's a funny juxtaposition. :) Good luck in the contest!
Comment from Carole Rosa
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Your short story is very interesting. In my opinion only, I didn't feel any laughs in my funny bone. I thought your writing skills were worth 5 stars. Carole

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    Thank you for the candid review, Carole.
reply by Carole Rosa on 28-Mar-2012
    Never say Never, thank you for the reply. I try to be honest about my reviews with the idea that the author could improve. I'm no expert and I value any remarks that others give me. I try to do the same. Thanks again, Carole
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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because of the ideas I put forward and not because I'm hanging out with Justin Bieber." <<<< ROFLMAO!!!


DAMN! Pardon my language, but I JUST gave away my LAST SIX! YOU shoulda had it. DAMN. In my mind/heart this is a perfeft 10!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    It took some finding, but those were all legitimate quotes. lol I couldn't resist when I saw the contest. Thanks for the awesome review, Phyllis.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Wow! This is great. Are you sure you AREN'T the Pres? Seriously, I visualized him saying what you've written. It was so easy!

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
    lol I was quoting him. Every news story has to have a few quotes, doesn't it? Thanks for a great review, Janice.