The Enchanted Forest
A nature poem.22 total reviews
Comment from EmmaJoAnderson
First of all, I really like the photo you chose. I think I would have envisioned a very similar scene myself if I hadn't had it to look at. Otherwise the poem was captivating in a very simple, pleasant way. It really makes me want to go take a walk in the woods. I can almost smell the "perfume" you talked about!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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First of all, I really like the photo you chose. I think I would have envisioned a very similar scene myself if I hadn't had it to look at. Otherwise the poem was captivating in a very simple, pleasant way. It really makes me want to go take a walk in the woods. I can almost smell the "perfume" you talked about!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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Yes, I was very fortunate to find the "perfect" picture. Thank you so much for your nice review. I am glad you liked the poem and could put yourself into the photo/poem.
Comment from mommerry
You have written a calming verse with lovely images. You said "stop and smell the roses" in a new way. I found nothing to criticize. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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You have written a calming verse with lovely images. You said "stop and smell the roses" in a new way. I found nothing to criticize. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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Thank you mommerry for your nice review of my poem. I am glad you liked it. I had not thought of it as "stopping to smell the roses." Yet, that is exactly what it's about. Thank you for that insight.
Comment from Bina1
How lovely. What a beautiful picture you paint here with your words! I see you have already been "Recognized" so I will join the crowd in giving you a cheer! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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How lovely. What a beautiful picture you paint here with your words! I see you have already been "Recognized" so I will join the crowd in giving you a cheer! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2012
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Thank you Bina for you kind review of my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from justchillin
A beautiful description of nature, so well presented that I was there with you. It's an amazing feeling just to sit and observe, with animals dropping made it quite magical. Very well done. Thank you
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2012
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A beautiful description of nature, so well presented that I was there with you. It's an amazing feeling just to sit and observe, with animals dropping made it quite magical. Very well done. Thank you
Comment Written 12-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2012
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I am glad that you enjoyed our "little visit" in the forest. I love being in the woods. They are truly magical places for me. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from mojo78
Thought provoking, the picture its self emphasized your words " I took a walk today down a lonely path ". This line in its self is what caught my attention. Your words are rather powerful and spiritual. Rather serene. Everyone walks the lonely path at some point in there life. It is what they choose to do with it. : )
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2012
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Thought provoking, the picture its self emphasized your words " I took a walk today down a lonely path ". This line in its self is what caught my attention. Your words are rather powerful and spiritual. Rather serene. Everyone walks the lonely path at some point in there life. It is what they choose to do with it. : )
Comment Written 12-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review of my poem. I am glad
you liked it. I also liked the first line. :o) It seems I'm always taking "lonely" paths and then discovering so many truths.
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Comment from seashellrees4
I thought this was a great poem. I liked how it flowed as I read it. Your words made me feel the magic of the enchanted forest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2012
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I thought this was a great poem. I liked how it flowed as I read it. Your words made me feel the magic of the enchanted forest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Denise S
You did a good job here. You took me on a wonderful trip into the woods. Your poem really brought the woods right into my home.I liked it a lot
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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You did a good job here. You took me on a wonderful trip into the woods. Your poem really brought the woods right into my home.I liked it a lot
Comment Written 02-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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Thank you Denise for your kind review of my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from mmayen
It really sounds magical. It's well written. It's presents nature at it's peak. It's a nice effort. Thanks for sharing and well done
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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It really sounds magical. It's well written. It's presents nature at it's peak. It's a nice effort. Thanks for sharing and well done
Comment Written 02-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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I am glad you found my poem magical. It was my intent. :o)
Comment from Kelleigh
And on that lonely path you found the greatest of all gifts, peace and a gaggle of others who wished to share their time with you. Great Job!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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And on that lonely path you found the greatest of all gifts, peace and a gaggle of others who wished to share their time with you. Great Job!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. I am glad you saw the true intent of my poem.
Comment from squid152
Your poem took to me to a very magical place where tall trees reached the sky, birds sang their songs, squirels and rabbits dropped by and bees danced.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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Your poem took to me to a very magical place where tall trees reached the sky, birds sang their songs, squirels and rabbits dropped by and bees danced.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2012
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. I am glad you found it to be a magical place.
