Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Barbara,

So the dominoes are going down one by one, at least one of the bad guys is going to be in big trouble - assuming he doesn't have the usual "human rights" moron screaming "police harrassment/profiling/planting evidence" and a soft judge/jury combination at his trial.

Well written as usual.

Patrick

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Barbara,
Wow, red hot chapter filled with magnificence action. Your action lastest chapter had me rooting for Troy to save his lovely lady, Anna, from the clutches of the abusive rednecks. Your narrative is excellent and as I read you do a great job showing and not telling. I look forward to reading further chapters. Keep on writing entertaining stories and please have a blessed day, my friend.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review support.

Comment from Carolyn Hilliard

Excellent

Wow! Hot! You stopped at just the right place. I want to find out what happens, and am sure I am not the only one. Excellent job, Barbara.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012

Thank you for the encouraging words.

Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

What an excellent post and a thrilling piece of writing, I hope Anna is okay. I loved the artwork, and this wonderful chapter as well.
Blessing for you Barbara!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Nanashirley

Excellent

I hate and appreciate the way you end your chapters. I want to keep reading and have to wait. If you publish people will be reading far into the night.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012

Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.

Comment from elgone

Exceptional

You leave the story at a natural breaking point with the reader eager to find out what happens next. It continues to be a compelling story. The confrontation between Ted and Troy was especially well done. The police actions were believable. I'm looking forward to the next part.

E

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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Thank you for the kind review and support.

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

What a fright for Troy..
so nerve-racking to have
a shotgun aimed at you.
Now they must save Anna.

I bet its weed - it's

Please let's have a happy ending...

Margaret

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012

I thought I fixed that, darn, I must have forgotten to click save. Thank you for your eagle eye.

Comment from Herb

Excellent

A bit of action hey. I have missed sections of this but I think that action was needed. Another good chapter in the common style.

Peter

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from peggles

Excellent

Barbara this chapter was so exciting
Visually dramatic and very well written
Troy dealt with the attempted kidnapping just right
I like him even better now
An excellent post and a thrilling piece of writing
Keep going I am waiting for more

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from pickthorn

Excellent

An exciting chapter with lots of action and drama. Well written. One suggestion...The line, ""Now to get to Anna without getting myself injured." I would think he would be more concerned about 'not getting killed' rather than injured

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2012

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Thank you for the kind review.