Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "part two, Chapter 18"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Writingfundimension
I loved the action in this chapter, barbara. Gave me a bit of scare that Troy might end up in the hospital! Your usual clean, well-developed prose. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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I loved the action in this chapter, barbara. Gave me a bit of scare that Troy might end up in the hospital! Your usual clean, well-developed prose. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, barbara.
Comment from Deejharrington
Wow! That was quite a ride! Love it when the police arrive just in time. I have always liked to think I'd react like Troy, I rather be shot where I stand, instead of getting into any crazy's car! Can't wait to read how it turns out!
deb
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Wow! That was quite a ride! Love it when the police arrive just in time. I have always liked to think I'd react like Troy, I rather be shot where I stand, instead of getting into any crazy's car! Can't wait to read how it turns out!
deb
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from bookishfabler
Hello again. I caugh yet another chapter. I think I might have missed something but I can pick it up. I try to check in at least once a week if not more. I hope things will more stable soon. I think this is progressing nicely. I might of liked more of a battle with the police and Ted, but that's just me. I'm looking forwrd to the next chapter.
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Hello again. I caugh yet another chapter. I think I might have missed something but I can pick it up. I try to check in at least once a week if not more. I hope things will more stable soon. I think this is progressing nicely. I might of liked more of a battle with the police and Ted, but that's just me. I'm looking forwrd to the next chapter.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I thought about putting more of conflict there, but decided against it because the story is basically about Troy and Anna.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent, excellent chapter. It was very tension filled and kept me reading and of course wanting more when I reached the end. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Excellent, excellent chapter. It was very tension filled and kept me reading and of course wanting more when I reached the end. Great job as always.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
I wouldn't have got in the dang truck either. I'm real glad the police came, but I still wonder what about Anna. This is an intriguing write. Thanks for the post.
Warmly, rebecca
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Hello, barbara.
I wouldn't have got in the dang truck either. I'm real glad the police came, but I still wonder what about Anna. This is an intriguing write. Thanks for the post.
Warmly, rebecca
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from rushingwater
I enjoyed reading this second chapter. It kept me involved until the end which is very good. I look forward to reading more of them in the future. I did not notice any errors nor did anything trip me in reading on the way through. Good job!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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I enjoyed reading this second chapter. It kept me involved until the end which is very good. I look forward to reading more of them in the future. I did not notice any errors nor did anything trip me in reading on the way through. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Gripping hanging on the edge of my seat action, Man I could not wait for Ted to get his ass out of the way. LOL great and action filled chapter. Well done.
BLessings
Jenny
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Gripping hanging on the edge of my seat action, Man I could not wait for Ted to get his ass out of the way. LOL great and action filled chapter. Well done.
BLessings
Jenny
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Barbara
It is a good thing that Everett sent the police to help Troy or I think he would be dead by now. The way you set up each scene is superb. You have painted such a wonderful picture with your words
Bear
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Hey there Barbara
It is a good thing that Everett sent the police to help Troy or I think he would be dead by now. The way you set up each scene is superb. You have painted such a wonderful picture with your words
Bear
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Hi Barbara, seems that the situation is hard, but I wait that go at better the things. This chapter is very emotive and is to very well done. Congrats.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Hi Barbara, seems that the situation is hard, but I wait that go at better the things. This chapter is very emotive and is to very well done. Congrats.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
Oh my goodness this is exciting chapter in your ongoing book. I look forward to the negotiations. I admire your work on this subject. Your fan, Linda
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Oh my goodness this is exciting chapter in your ongoing book. I look forward to the negotiations. I admire your work on this subject. Your fan, Linda
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
