For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Guardians "Poems about those winged gifts from above.
16 total reviews
Comment from poetstar
This picture and poem combo also made my day. I was especially delighted to see the pretty pale female cardinal with red lipstick on her beak. I often see the male cardinal, but not the female, so this is a treat. Hope they are going to make cute baby cardinals together. Spring has sprung. Love your friend Vonnie
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
This picture and poem combo also made my day. I was especially delighted to see the pretty pale female cardinal with red lipstick on her beak. I often see the male cardinal, but not the female, so this is a treat. Hope they are going to make cute baby cardinals together. Spring has sprung. Love your friend Vonnie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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I am honored by your six stars. That day at work I was stressed and the cardinals gave me some peace. Thanks again,love Elaine
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I really loved seeing the female cardinal. She seems so left out of things in pictures. Vonnie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello mermaids what a lovely poem about cardinal they are such beautiful birds
nicely said--
When
watching these
beautiful guardians
of my soul
if only I could follow
their path of living
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
Hello mermaids what a lovely poem about cardinal they are such beautiful birds
nicely said--
When
watching these
beautiful guardians
of my soul
if only I could follow
their path of living
Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
You give a lovely description of what you get out of watching the birds. They are certainly worth watching, as the lovely photo indicates. The birds offer a great way to reduce the workplace stress. I find watching my cats has a similar effect on me, as they sometimes look so relaxed. Beautiful wording in this includes "guardians of my soul." You also present an excellent description of the birds as they signal happiness. judi
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
You give a lovely description of what you get out of watching the birds. They are certainly worth watching, as the lovely photo indicates. The birds offer a great way to reduce the workplace stress. I find watching my cats has a similar effect on me, as they sometimes look so relaxed. Beautiful wording in this includes "guardians of my soul." You also present an excellent description of the birds as they signal happiness. judi
Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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I am honored by your wonderful review. These beautiful birds gave me so much peace that day. Elaine
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You're welcome, mermaids. judi
Comment from oozer
Thanks for this lovely picture and poem. cOLOURS are nothing short of a feast! Words are great too. Should that
be flies into the bushes?
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
Thanks for this lovely picture and poem. cOLOURS are nothing short of a feast! Words are great too. Should that
be flies into the bushes?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Thanks again for your generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
Sigh what a novel idea to relieve stress and strain of the day. Beautiful thoughts of these two birds makes for a lovely break.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
Sigh what a novel idea to relieve stress and strain of the day. Beautiful thoughts of these two birds makes for a lovely break.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Thanks for your wonderful comments and taking time to read. Elaine
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi mermainds
They are lovely birds, and I was lucky enough to see some when I visited friends in Kentucky a few years back.
Nice rhythm to your poem, lovely imagery and a nice way to record a break from the grind!
Patrick
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
Hi mermainds
They are lovely birds, and I was lucky enough to see some when I visited friends in Kentucky a few years back.
Nice rhythm to your poem, lovely imagery and a nice way to record a break from the grind!
Patrick
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Thanks for a great review and taking time to read. Elaine