Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Wow!! This is absolutely stunning 5-7-5 Senryu you have written here old sport. It was a pleasure to review this splendid work and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Thanks old sport. Most appreciated.

Comment from Jake Stain

Excellent

Nice work! LOL I think you did awesome. The perfect play on words! Lol. This took more thought to write than most I've read. Very nice work! Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Thanks for an awesome review...yeah I had this greenery stashed for a rainy day. LMAO Thanks a bunch.

Comment from wiljacro

Excellent

HI! I like your chosen theme and your quirky play on words. The imagery also helps to create the right setting. all in all, very clever and gives the reader a smile to start the day. Not a bad acheivement for only 17 syllables! wiljacro.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Thanks for likin' my quirky...most appreciated.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

The satori presents an interesting satire/irony. Funny that I had not thought of "pot plants" in this sense before. Good luck to you in the contest. Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Many thanks Jeanie. I appreciate your review. Yes, when this one dawned on me I wrote this and just stashed it for a rainy day.
Cheers and thanks a bunch.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Now I bet that was some party. Hosts and guests truly are into keeping it green. Not just on St. Patrick's Day. Best to you with the entry.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Sure sounds like it! LMAO Thanks so much and due to your green comments re: St Patricks I've picked up on that in my notes.
Thank you again.

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

I don't think this would offend, as it's sounds like a real possibility....good senryu, speaking about human nature..
I wish you well in the contest...
Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Victoria


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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2012

Sure, I guess it IS a real possibility. Many thanks for your thoughtful review.

reply by mrsmajor on 17-Mar-2012

You are most welcome!