Through Nature's Eyes
We must open our eyes.32 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
This is a great poem. And so very true.If only man could understand, and see the way we do. Man better wake up pretty soon. Your poem has a great smooth read to it and is very well written. A beautiful picture.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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This is a great poem. And so very true.If only man could understand, and see the way we do. Man better wake up pretty soon. Your poem has a great smooth read to it and is very well written. A beautiful picture.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you, Linda, for this eautiful review, I am really happy you see these things the way I do. Thank you!xsx
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, sandra, you did a great job writing this poem about the things that are seen from a birds eye view, great imagery presented here. i enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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this is very well written, sandra, you did a great job writing this poem about the things that are seen from a birds eye view, great imagery presented here. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for this really nice review, sweetwoodjax, I do so appcreciate your lovely comments! xsx
Comment from cvcopac
I enjoyed this poem that looks through the eyes of an Eagle. The Eagle's prey enjoy a luxurious and colorful backdrop. It's rich in imagery, assonance, rhyme, and written primarily in iambics. Good enjambment.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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I enjoyed this poem that looks through the eyes of an Eagle. The Eagle's prey enjoy a luxurious and colorful backdrop. It's rich in imagery, assonance, rhyme, and written primarily in iambics. Good enjambment.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you, cvopac, so much for this really lovely and kind review! I am so pleased you enjoed this one, thank you! xsx
Comment from misscookie
Oh how this popem makes me feel as if I was there on thei love how your poem flows and you had my attention from the first line to the lasty.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Oh how this popem makes me feel as if I was there on thei love how your poem flows and you had my attention from the first line to the lasty.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Miss Cookie, thank you so, so much for your amazing review, and all those stars! You are so kind and I am so very pleased you enjoyed this one, thank you! xsx
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Someone finally picked that picture. I love it! Symbol of our Country.Your poem is very nice and speaks of the beauty of nature.
While nature clothes the world
With bluebells in the woodlands
And poppies in the fields
As heather, gorse and buttercups
Are strewn across the hills'
You paint a beautiful picture with those words. Good work.
Honeycomb
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Someone finally picked that picture. I love it! Symbol of our Country.Your poem is very nice and speaks of the beauty of nature.
While nature clothes the world
With bluebells in the woodlands
And poppies in the fields
As heather, gorse and buttercups
Are strewn across the hills'
You paint a beautiful picture with those words. Good work.
Honeycomb
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you so very much for this amazing review and those 5 stars, Honeycomb! You have no idea how much I appreciate your words, thank you! xsx
Comment from cce29
Beautiful photo for your poem! YOur poem has good rhyme, and it flows well. the syll. count is a little choppy...dont need to be the same, but its best if they have a pattern, or stay around a certain count. Besides that, great poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Beautiful photo for your poem! YOur poem has good rhyme, and it flows well. the syll. count is a little choppy...dont need to be the same, but its best if they have a pattern, or stay around a certain count. Besides that, great poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for this review, cce29, and for the imput, I do appreciate them, thank you! xsx
Comment from burton.0115
This is a fantastic piece of work! So descriptive and beautifully written. Well done!
The art is lovely too, you have chosen well.
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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This is a fantastic piece of work! So descriptive and beautifully written. Well done!
The art is lovely too, you have chosen well.
Mary
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much, Mary, for this wonderful review and all those stars!! I really am so pleased that you enjoyed this, thank you! xsx
Comment from tinams
A very beautiful poem that made me feel like I was standing on top of a cliff looking around me at all the things you describe. I could feel the wind in my hair and hear the eagle screech. Well done :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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A very beautiful poem that made me feel like I was standing on top of a cliff looking around me at all the things you describe. I could feel the wind in my hair and hear the eagle screech. Well done :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you, tinams! That is such a brilliant review, I am so glad you enjoyed it! xsx
Comment from mumsyone
A beautiful poem, with a beautiful presentation! Nicely done.
Through Natures (Nature's) Eyes
Where mermaids (mermaids') songs inspire
Are strewn across the hills(.)'
These lines would be better in past tense, since they are followed by past tense lines:
The eagle flying overhead
Soars (Soared) towards the sun
Then swoops (swooped) with grace, to then embrace
The sea and earth, as one.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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A beautiful poem, with a beautiful presentation! Nicely done.
Through Natures (Nature's) Eyes
Where mermaids (mermaids') songs inspire
Are strewn across the hills(.)'
These lines would be better in past tense, since they are followed by past tense lines:
The eagle flying overhead
Soars (Soared) towards the sun
Then swoops (swooped) with grace, to then embrace
The sea and earth, as one.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for this really helpful review, mumsyone! Yes, I see that now, and I will go in and change those words, thank you. xsx
Comment from patsypats
Very well written with your descriptive word choices. Your style is unique and the imagery you portray through those words is beyond beautiful.Excellent picture choice to accent your work:))
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Very well written with your descriptive word choices. Your style is unique and the imagery you portray through those words is beyond beautiful.Excellent picture choice to accent your work:))
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, patsypats, that is so nice of you! xsx
