Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "part three, chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from The Stranger
well there comes a time when you either waste your life by running from the past, or else you say with sheer determination, enough is enough!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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well there comes a time when you either waste your life by running from the past, or else you say with sheer determination, enough is enough!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
Yes, I like it that Anna is ready to take a stand. I'm sure it finally comes down to that. You have a great way with this story. I always want more.
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Yes, I like it that Anna is ready to take a stand. I'm sure it finally comes down to that. You have a great way with this story. I always want more.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! Babara, the plot now really thickens in your story here girl.
I enjoyed this read as usual your narration is excellent and keeps the reader captured.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Wow! Babara, the plot now really thickens in your story here girl.
I enjoyed this read as usual your narration is excellent and keeps the reader captured.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
Great how you captured the feeling of the victim not feeling validated for her own fear, like she is the sick one. Lots of action in this one.
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Great how you captured the feeling of the victim not feeling validated for her own fear, like she is the sick one. Lots of action in this one.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from Mara del Mar
A chapter that have a good dosage of intrigue y suspense. Put me a little nervous the visit of unknown. We wait by the next chapter. Congrats, this was very good.
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A chapter that have a good dosage of intrigue y suspense. Put me a little nervous the visit of unknown. We wait by the next chapter. Congrats, this was very good.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This story is getting more adventurous, along with the romance. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Barbara,
This story is getting more adventurous, along with the romance. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from joann r romei
This chapter has great scenes ,it would bring the reader in more if the 5 senses were incorporated into the scenes, there is enough tension and conflict to keep the reader engaged,
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This chapter has great scenes ,it would bring the reader in more if the 5 senses were incorporated into the scenes, there is enough tension and conflict to keep the reader engaged,
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Comment from Writingfundimension
Your writing in this chapter is as strong as Anna is becoming, barbara. You, particularly, reflect this strength in the final paragraph. What's so hard about her decision is that she needs to make it for her own personal growth but it could cause some harm for others. That's something you show extremely well in this chapter. Good, solid writing as I've come to appreciate from you. Warm regards, Bev
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Your writing in this chapter is as strong as Anna is becoming, barbara. You, particularly, reflect this strength in the final paragraph. What's so hard about her decision is that she needs to make it for her own personal growth but it could cause some harm for others. That's something you show extremely well in this chapter. Good, solid writing as I've come to appreciate from you. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, Anna's daily life is getting more and more complicated and dangerous. How can Bobby afford to hire those people to follow and threaten Anna, I wonder. This is exciting but I can't help feeling exhausted for and with Anna...:)
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Hi, Barbara, Anna's daily life is getting more and more complicated and dangerous. How can Bobby afford to hire those people to follow and threaten Anna, I wonder. This is exciting but I can't help feeling exhausted for and with Anna...:)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Great chapter, barbara. Hoping that those creeps are going to be caught soon. I enjoyed the part about Anna thinking Sam was a homeless guy, so his disguise must have been good. The intimidation seems to be working. Anna seems almost as much worried about Troy and her other friends being in danger as she is for herself. Good dialogue, and you show with tension Anna feels very well. No comma needed after although in "Although I wish it wasn't..." judi
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Great chapter, barbara. Hoping that those creeps are going to be caught soon. I enjoyed the part about Anna thinking Sam was a homeless guy, so his disguise must have been good. The intimidation seems to be working. Anna seems almost as much worried about Troy and her other friends being in danger as she is for herself. Good dialogue, and you show with tension Anna feels very well. No comma needed after although in "Although I wish it wasn't..." judi
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
