Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "part three, chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from HPicasso
You always come up with something new; flowed well and still true to the characters and the story.
Anna has every reason to be scared will Bobbie's friends.
I don't think that Anna will ever be free of a threat in whatever form. Anna never gets peace to recover. Enjoyable read Mrs. Barbara, I really like the Troy character.
Thank you so much for sharing your creativity.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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You always come up with something new; flowed well and still true to the characters and the story.
Anna has every reason to be scared will Bobbie's friends.
I don't think that Anna will ever be free of a threat in whatever form. Anna never gets peace to recover. Enjoyable read Mrs. Barbara, I really like the Troy character.
Thank you so much for sharing your creativity.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara
Your chapter had me at the edge of my seat. The threats against Anna are also aimed at Troy. Please stop these stalking bastards. Your descriptive writing is great. Your dialogue is very good and as I read the scene played in my head with superb imagery. Your hubby's art work is stunning. I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers as a 'must' read for a smashing good time. I'd encourage you to keep moving forward with your entertaining story, my friend. I hope to catch your next chapter. Please have a lovely day. I hope you enjoy your week free of class, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Barbara
Your chapter had me at the edge of my seat. The threats against Anna are also aimed at Troy. Please stop these stalking bastards. Your descriptive writing is great. Your dialogue is very good and as I read the scene played in my head with superb imagery. Your hubby's art work is stunning. I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers as a 'must' read for a smashing good time. I'd encourage you to keep moving forward with your entertaining story, my friend. I hope to catch your next chapter. Please have a lovely day. I hope you enjoy your week free of class, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. It's always good to hear from you.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
such a well written chapter, Barbara,
but then you never disappoint.
How strong and determined Anna has become,
to keep her job and raise her son, no matter
what is thrown at her.
Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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such a well written chapter, Barbara,
but then you never disappoint.
How strong and determined Anna has become,
to keep her job and raise her son, no matter
what is thrown at her.
Margaret
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anisa-
Another excellent installment. I commented on your last section and had a few questions about some things. When you replied, you mentioned that you knew from personal experience.
Is this a true story? Or based on a true story?
Anyways, well done. You weave through the paragraphs with ease and take the reader along at a nice pace. The plot is easy to follow and the characters are realistic and believable.
Looking forward to the next one! Keep up the good work.
Anisa
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Another excellent installment. I commented on your last section and had a few questions about some things. When you replied, you mentioned that you knew from personal experience.
Is this a true story? Or based on a true story?
Anyways, well done. You weave through the paragraphs with ease and take the reader along at a nice pace. The plot is easy to follow and the characters are realistic and believable.
Looking forward to the next one! Keep up the good work.
Anisa
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Parts of this story are true. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gideon Roth
Good Afternoon, Barbara. Wow, another emotionally griping chapter that servers to move this wonderfully written story right along. Great job on this captivating chapter that held my interest from start to finish. Looking forward to your next submission...Tim
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Good Afternoon, Barbara. Wow, another emotionally griping chapter that servers to move this wonderfully written story right along. Great job on this captivating chapter that held my interest from start to finish. Looking forward to your next submission...Tim
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
It looks like these people never stop. She married a very dangerous man. I am wondering what will happen next. Abuse never stops. It is just a more advanced form of bullying. It looks as if this story might be building up to a climax, Barbara.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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It looks like these people never stop. She married a very dangerous man. I am wondering what will happen next. Abuse never stops. It is just a more advanced form of bullying. It looks as if this story might be building up to a climax, Barbara.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from hyway94
BW, How come you can write so good? I can sit here and read your work and not fine one mistake. YOu have a way of putting the eader in the middle of things. Just keep on writing and I'll just keep on reading.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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BW, How come you can write so good? I can sit here and read your work and not fine one mistake. YOu have a way of putting the eader in the middle of things. Just keep on writing and I'll just keep on reading.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from arnie47
Very good chapter. Not only does it move the story along at a nice clip, but it moves your emotions too. Making a stand and having friends help you out. Looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Very good chapter. Not only does it move the story along at a nice clip, but it moves your emotions too. Making a stand and having friends help you out. Looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ulster3
Wow! Barbara.
It's true a person can't keep on running, but the risk here is so great. That family sure sticks together in criminal behavior! This was a great read.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Wow! Barbara.
It's true a person can't keep on running, but the risk here is so great. That family sure sticks together in criminal behavior! This was a great read.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from peggles
what an excelent gripping chapter this is and a easy follow on from the previous one
Anna's life has so many new twists and turns it's getting more and more complicated and extremmely dangerous
realistic dialogue that expresis the emotions of your characters
Anna's anxieties are bealivable and Troy's need to protect her very touching
I will be waiting to see where you go next
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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what an excelent gripping chapter this is and a easy follow on from the previous one
Anna's life has so many new twists and turns it's getting more and more complicated and extremmely dangerous
realistic dialogue that expresis the emotions of your characters
Anna's anxieties are bealivable and Troy's need to protect her very touching
I will be waiting to see where you go next
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
