Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "part three, chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, oh, how the plot thickens. I can feel the fear that Anna is experiencing. And, then to have Ted come right into the office. Whew, what a brave girl she is trying to be.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Barbara, oh, how the plot thickens. I can feel the fear that Anna is experiencing. And, then to have Ted come right into the office. Whew, what a brave girl she is trying to be.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I liked and enjoyed very much the dialogues in this story... With all those details and Troy character. This is another wonderful chapter... COngratulation Barbara!!
Great job!!
:)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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I liked and enjoyed very much the dialogues in this story... With all those details and Troy character. This is another wonderful chapter... COngratulation Barbara!!
Great job!!
:)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from krazykats2011
Again, I find this fascinating reading. I cannot envision the amount of work that goes into something as complex as this. It seems too far above my capabilities. But, anyway, having read it now, I thank you for putting all your hard work into this so that we can enjoy and/or benefit from the wisdom contained in your chapters. The only thing here that troubles me with it, is under the Today's Post heading, you begin with "You mean that beggar's Sam?". What exactly does this mean? I have tried to figure this one out, but found instead, that I was left all the more confused for trying. Could you shed some light here for me? Other than that, Great job again.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Again, I find this fascinating reading. I cannot envision the amount of work that goes into something as complex as this. It seems too far above my capabilities. But, anyway, having read it now, I thank you for putting all your hard work into this so that we can enjoy and/or benefit from the wisdom contained in your chapters. The only thing here that troubles me with it, is under the Today's Post heading, you begin with "You mean that beggar's Sam?". What exactly does this mean? I have tried to figure this one out, but found instead, that I was left all the more confused for trying. Could you shed some light here for me? Other than that, Great job again.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Anna just found out that the beggar across the street the PI Sam and he's protecting Anna. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Another good chapter. I like the way Anna is getting a back bone I hope she doesn't regret it. I am always so eager to start reading. I had to go back to see the art work.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Another good chapter. I like the way Anna is getting a back bone I hope she doesn't regret it. I am always so eager to start reading. I had to go back to see the art work.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
I think I must have missed the last post or two but it was easy to pick up the story again. The characters of Troy and Anna are very likeable, and I enjoy the dialogue between them. I also like the twist where the homeless man is Sam. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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I think I must have missed the last post or two but it was easy to pick up the story again. The characters of Troy and Anna are very likeable, and I enjoy the dialogue between them. I also like the twist where the homeless man is Sam. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Welcome back. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - another wonderful post. It is amazing that some people just can't let go. Your's is fiction, but I've seen this first hand. Always warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Barbara - another wonderful post. It is amazing that some people just can't let go. Your's is fiction, but I've seen this first hand. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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So have I. That's why I felt it needed to be written.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Despite the tension I got a chuckle here: Finally, her eyes met Troy's. "I'm officially scared." ;p
Hmmm... Interesting! "If he'd been watching me, he already knew where I worked. Why did he come inside and ask?"
"Intimidation."
Great hook at the end :)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Despite the tension I got a chuckle here: Finally, her eyes met Troy's. "I'm officially scared." ;p
Hmmm... Interesting! "If he'd been watching me, he already knew where I worked. Why did he come inside and ask?"
"Intimidation."
Great hook at the end :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hello Barbara,
Another gripping chapter. The dialogue is convincing and the relationship between Troy and Anna has genuine warmth.
The tension is building and in the face of it all, Anna is determined and brave. Cannot wait to see what happens next. :0)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hello Barbara,
Another gripping chapter. The dialogue is convincing and the relationship between Troy and Anna has genuine warmth.
The tension is building and in the face of it all, Anna is determined and brave. Cannot wait to see what happens next. :0)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
once again you have pulled another corker out of the bag. this is another great chapter worthy of being read. you keep the reader there.
i am glad to see though the domestic violence helpline numbers there. too few women know there number never mind knowing how to go about and get it.
well done
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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hiya,
once again you have pulled another corker out of the bag. this is another great chapter worthy of being read. you keep the reader there.
i am glad to see though the domestic violence helpline numbers there. too few women know there number never mind knowing how to go about and get it.
well done
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley B
As always, another great chapter. The story line just pulled me in. I was scared the stalker the stalker was going to meet her this time. You always keep me on my toes! Excellent job, Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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As always, another great chapter. The story line just pulled me in. I was scared the stalker the stalker was going to meet her this time. You always keep me on my toes! Excellent job, Shirley
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
