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The Red Swimsuit Story

The most bizarre week of my life.

80 total reviews 
Comment from Vladilynn
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Here I am dropping my sixer to you!!! Bravo! I know what you feel about the swimsuit. I'm a naive on my younger aged and embarrassed to wear two piece or even one piece swimsuit never less I can't even swim because of that. Even though people around me, saying that I got a body to display any time that can turn heads around. Never ever had a guts to wear that my jeans and tshirt. I got married and had kids, now I can say I'm much daring to do anything now, but that displayable body was gone. Ive wasted the time that I can do anything, hourglass can't be turn upside down to the same time it just continues to a new click of time. Reading this one gave me a positive thought, hopefully I can have your fighting spirit as well!!!

Thank you for sharing and well done!

Nice to meet you.
Love much,

Lynn:0)

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    What the whole thing has taught me, is that we are sometimes better than we think! I wouldn't say that the experience has made me feel beautiful, just a lot more confident than I was. I'm sure you could do just the same, just as easily. I'm beginning to feel that I'm the one who was 'ageist' in believing my 'alluring' days were over. LOL (Who says you can't teach an old dog new tricks!) Thank you so much for your fabulous review. Alexis x
Comment from Penny 4 your thought
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Now you have me wondering what it was that you were praying for...I Know that God has a sense of humor and sometimes the answers we get are not exactly what we were looking for, but none-the-less it is still an answer. There is no doubt that you are a talented author and this is a beguiling tale .LOL a solid six...Red Dress.
Penny 4 your thought

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    Woh! Your comments give me much more of a thrill than most of the comments I received on that dammed site! I find any of it hard to take seriously, except for the contracts I've signed to write about my opinion of dating sites! Thank you so much for your lovely review and wonderful complimentary six. Alexis x
Comment from Trybuck
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I didn't notice any spags but I was a bit enthralled with your story. We never know what to expect when we set out on a new adventure.
Hopefully, only good things will come your way.
Very well written, Buck

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    Personally, I'm just glad it's all over, and I can retreat into my hole! Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from Rama Rao
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An excellent piece, I mean piece of writing.
I don't think all the guys who sent you email could be faulted and I can't believe you're in your fifties.
The swim suit has mad a new you out of your old you. Why, you can apply for a role in Baywatch. In this morphed form stop deprecating yourself and go get yourself a suitable guy.
Just kidding. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece and watching the artwork(?).

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    Sadly nearer sixty than fifty, I'm afraid, which has made the whole experience even more cringe-worthy. My kids think it's hilarious! Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from bhogg
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I was getting ready to sign off for the night, only time to read one more post. At my age, I will go to bed with a smile! Nicely written and a cute story. Regards, Bill

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    Thank you, Bill. I think it will take me a while to stop cringing! Alexis x
Comment from judiverse
Exceptional
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I really love this one, alexis. Your description of your figure and the size swimsuit you bought. There's also your relationship with your daughter, which seems good. Then your attempts to enter the dating arena after the death of your husband. That was some response you got after posting your swimsuit photo on your dating site. Amazing! Great work that swimsuit did! The photo does look lovely. A well constructed story without errors in grammar, spelling, etc. I'm pleased to say a six-star rating. judiverse

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
    Thank you so much for your brilliant review and generous six. I must admit, I'm pleased that the whole thing has settled down for the moment. The story's appearing in one of the big 'glossies'in six to eight weeks, at which time I shall take for the hills! Alexis x
reply by judiverse on 13-Mar-2012
    Oh, good for you, alexis. Glad to hear of your success. judiverse
Comment from HPicasso
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Your writing is invariably much more than pleasant. The story has perfect choice of words and makes a lovely read.
Good for you! You are a very beautiful woman.
I like the way that you described how you shop.
What a great story and great picture.
Wondering what your daughter and son said about this?
Your dialogue and discription make the story attention from the first line. Next New Year is going to be much better for you! Well done indeed with this splendid work.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    My children have been wonderful, and my daughter's 'go girl' encouragement has been what has seen me through the darkest hours since I lost my husband. I do so hope you're right, I would hate to spend another New Years like that! Thank you so much. Alexis x
Comment from MumEsGirl
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Woo Hoo I might try that trick myself. Was seriously wondering what happened to my Red Dress story.

Real life is even more intriguing. This was brilliant and witty and fantastic. What a boost.

I wish you every luck
hugs
kate

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    Thank you, Kate. I wasn't sure if I should even write about it but I had to write an article for 'That's life magazine today, so thought I might as well let my friends on fan story see what I'd written first. Personally, I can't wait for life to return to 'normal' Alexis x
Comment from c_lucas
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Some times the reaction is greater than the action. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a humorous read.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    You are so right, Charlie. Never, in a million years could I have envisaged any of this happening! Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
reply by c_lucas on 12-Mar-2012
    You're welcome, Alexis. Charlie
Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Well, this does lend a bit of spice to that song "Lady In Red"! I enjoyed your story; it was well written, flowed beautifully and kept my attention from start to end. And I have to say, that pic of you in the red swimsuit is very flattering, and it's no wonder you got over 1100 responses to it! Geeze woman, you could've had your pick and I bet there would've been a few young enough to be your son, especially now you're a celeb :)) Excellent and entertaining story; thanks for sharing it! Cheers xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxo

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
    The crazy thing is, I deleted it all when I knew that the press had got hold of it and were making such a fuss. If I'd wanted that kind of exposure I would have been delighted, but at fifty seven, I find it all a bit embarrassing! Yes, a huge amount of messages were from guys in their thirties and forty's, which I find seriously weird! I'd rather be a tiger on fan story, than a cougar in the real world! Thank you for your wonderful review, I am now cringing slightly less! Alexis x