Comment from Modee

Excellent

I love the line about jumping on the bed. It is so youthful sounding and something I would tell my wife. haha. I enjoyed the read and the way it flowed.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

Hi Modee,
Thanks for dropping by and leaving a thought or two.
I appreciate it and you can steal that line to tell the other half if you like!!
cheers
Grant

Comment from T.A. Walk

Excellent

I just thought I'd say that I really enjoyed this poem. So full of emotion. Didn't catch any mistakes. Good job and good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

Hi there T.A. Walk,
Thanks for the comments and wishes. I appreciate it mate.
cheers
Grant

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

And all the while I thank you
from the bottom of my heart.
And all the while you give what
I require.

Such a write! It is wonderful and written so as everyone may enjoy it. Sigh ...

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

Hello there Gungalo,
thankyou for dropping by for a read. I'm glad you liked it and hope you enjoy more of my portfolio.
I must say that this "Dark Club" sounds intriguing to me!
cheers
Grant

reply by Gungalo on 10-Mar-2012

Just getting started and you can enter one now for next week. Good luck guy.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is what we need, a song about new love and the hope of the good feelings to follow. What we require. What we aspire to. "You give me hope to wonder
if my dreams are not misplaced" Great wording and nice flow.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

Hello there Bill,
I appreciate the effort of a personal review and the comments are well received good sir.
I hope to see you around.
Cheers
Grant

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem and thought it was so sweet of you to write, and what a lucky guy you are! Now, I would like to see you write, part two, that says what you have given back in return!

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

Hi there Linda England Bonam,
Thank you for your kind thoughts and cool feedback.
I am glad you enjoyed it and can tell you there is a whole lot more of it to be found in my portfolio!! lol
cheers
Grant

reply by Linda England Bonam on 10-Mar-2012

Well, I will have to check out your portfolio! I am a little behind on reviewing right now, because I have been out of town for my Mother's illness, and subsequent death Feb. 28...but I will make a mental note to check out your work. I invite you, anytime, to check out mine, as well. Nice to meet you, Grant!

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012

I'm sorry for your loss and I hope she can inspire your muse for a long time to come. x

reply by Linda England Bonam on 10-Mar-2012

Thank you!