reflections
how your reflection decieves you2 total reviews
Comment from Chris Tee
Sorry I had to abandon the read because your poem has too many syllables.
You will not shape in the contest.
This is a three line poem required.
It must have 5 syllables not words in the first line.
7 syllables not words in the second.
It must have 5 syllables in the last line
Let me try to help you.
It is a 5-7-5, haiku and senryu format, Ok:
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Three lines only you see
Now do not give up go and edit it.
Take your time to figure it out do not rush Ok.
Before you post a poem read the rules carefully and abide by those rules.
Once you have edited it reply to me.
I shall re-review it for you.
If you do not understand tell me in your reply Ok,
Syllable counting is really easy
When counting syllables in English you are counting the sound that each or more of the vowels in the word make. Then you count the number of times you hear the vowel sound. Vowels are A, E, I, O, U, and Y is also a syllable sound. She sound is important when you say taxed you do not hear the ed.
Sleeping = 2 sleep=1 ing =1 total =2 syllables
If you edit this I shall re-review it for a better rating
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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Sorry I had to abandon the read because your poem has too many syllables.
You will not shape in the contest.
This is a three line poem required.
It must have 5 syllables not words in the first line.
7 syllables not words in the second.
It must have 5 syllables in the last line
Let me try to help you.
It is a 5-7-5, haiku and senryu format, Ok:
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Three lines only you see
Now do not give up go and edit it.
Take your time to figure it out do not rush Ok.
Before you post a poem read the rules carefully and abide by those rules.
Once you have edited it reply to me.
I shall re-review it for you.
If you do not understand tell me in your reply Ok,
Syllable counting is really easy
When counting syllables in English you are counting the sound that each or more of the vowels in the word make. Then you count the number of times you hear the vowel sound. Vowels are A, E, I, O, U, and Y is also a syllable sound. She sound is important when you say taxed you do not hear the ed.
Sleeping = 2 sleep=1 ing =1 total =2 syllables
If you edit this I shall re-review it for a better rating
Comment Written 10-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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can you please tell me how many syllables are in this line " reflections does lie seldom"
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seven
Re=1 flec =1tions =1 does =1 lie =1sel =1 dom =1 Total = 7
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
Great idea you've came out with. Really good choice of words. I admire the way you maintain the flow until the end. Hope you'd do well in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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Great idea you've came out with. Really good choice of words. I admire the way you maintain the flow until the end. Hope you'd do well in the contest
Comment Written 09-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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thank you
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hey thank you
