Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Part two, Chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
Yeah I saw the whole vet gag coming. Even so it was too sweet to see how Anna was concerned. This was also a very chilling chapter. I can just imagine the unsavory things Bobby and his pack of dogs would find funny to do with Anna. She was in more danger than I realized.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Yeah I saw the whole vet gag coming. Even so it was too sweet to see how Anna was concerned. This was also a very chilling chapter. I can just imagine the unsavory things Bobby and his pack of dogs would find funny to do with Anna. She was in more danger than I realized.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This is an informative post, as Everett gathers information about Anna's Stalker(s). Now they know these are dangrous friends of her ex-husband. Two have been positively identified, Why is Slim out of prison after his criminal acts,
Just as I suspected the homeless man across the street from Anna's job was reallySam in heavy disguise.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
This is an informative post, as Everett gathers information about Anna's Stalker(s). Now they know these are dangrous friends of her ex-husband. Two have been positively identified, Why is Slim out of prison after his criminal acts,
Just as I suspected the homeless man across the street from Anna's job was reallySam in heavy disguise.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fairy77
Excellent dialogue and plot development.I missed a couple installments.Good description and enjoyable read.I enjoyed the simplicity of a meal over everything going on.Well written.beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Excellent dialogue and plot development.I missed a couple installments.Good description and enjoyable read.I enjoyed the simplicity of a meal over everything going on.Well written.beth fairy77.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rainbowbrite376
I see I have some catching up to do and it will be my pleasure. Very well written. The story flows and is easy for me to visualize the scene. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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I see I have some catching up to do and it will be my pleasure. Very well written. The story flows and is easy for me to visualize the scene. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carrie Carson
I like the story and the dialogue is well done. Of course, good guy bad guy conflict works. I think this is a topic, too, that never gets enough public attention.
Good read, thank you.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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I like the story and the dialogue is well done. Of course, good guy bad guy conflict works. I think this is a topic, too, that never gets enough public attention.
Good read, thank you.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbie, this chapter made good progress with the case. I wonder when they will ever get to the bottom of the pile so Troy and Anna can get on with their lives.
Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Hi Barbie, this chapter made good progress with the case. I wonder when they will ever get to the bottom of the pile so Troy and Anna can get on with their lives.
Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
An other wonderful chapter! It is so thoughtful of Anna to think of the homeless man when she was in so much fear. I enjoyed the suspense you're building. A very well written story!
Great job Barbara!
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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An other wonderful chapter! It is so thoughtful of Anna to think of the homeless man when she was in so much fear. I enjoyed the suspense you're building. A very well written story!
Great job Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rattler
Your work reads so smooth. I really like the dialog I was able to keep up with who said what. Most of the time I have to reread dialog when three people are talking but I had no issues with this dialog. I look forward to going back and reading your earlier post.
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Your work reads so smooth. I really like the dialog I was able to keep up with who said what. Most of the time I have to reread dialog when three people are talking but I had no issues with this dialog. I look forward to going back and reading your earlier post.
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Max Edon
I enjoyed this part of the chapter very much. Even though it was mostly conversation, it was very exciting and tense. I am looking forward to the rest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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I enjoyed this part of the chapter very much. Even though it was mostly conversation, it was very exciting and tense. I am looking forward to the rest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Good read. It sounds like all the loose ends may be getting tied up. I read carefully; who ever proof it did a great job. Looking forward to the next part. C
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
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Good read. It sounds like all the loose ends may be getting tied up. I read carefully; who ever proof it did a great job. Looking forward to the next part. C
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
