A Seed Of Faith
Moving Mountains; Poetry Wands Contest Submission77 total reviews
Comment from Geronymous
Alas I am not perhaps in ur spiritual category but this was brilliant. Easy to follow easy to read. I assume the contest required this line of thinking but alas it was very predictabls. U describe the dark side brilliantly - I was quite moved and that does not happen a lot - and then u moves bit by bit like a swing out of the dark into the light. I aint v religious but this was beautiful. Well done. From my phone
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Alas I am not perhaps in ur spiritual category but this was brilliant. Easy to follow easy to read. I assume the contest required this line of thinking but alas it was very predictabls. U describe the dark side brilliantly - I was quite moved and that does not happen a lot - and then u moves bit by bit like a swing out of the dark into the light. I aint v religious but this was beautiful. Well done. From my phone
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Hi Geronymous...it means alot to me that my poem moved you. Thank you for your words...they mean much...blessings.
Comment from peggles
my goodness this was a compelling and thought provoking read
Your words were so expressive I came with you through your darkest moments
then seeing the light hope spring into my heart
you came through all by reading the greatest book of all
I think this is a first rate entry for the contest and it should do very well
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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my goodness this was a compelling and thought provoking read
Your words were so expressive I came with you through your darkest moments
then seeing the light hope spring into my heart
you came through all by reading the greatest book of all
I think this is a first rate entry for the contest and it should do very well
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much peggles, for your wonderful review...blessings.
Comment from johnminot12
A very well expressed feeling about keeping the faith and not losing sight when life throws you a curve. With faith and hope God will be at your side.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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A very well expressed feeling about keeping the faith and not losing sight when life throws you a curve. With faith and hope God will be at your side.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for the six stars johnminot12, I truly appreciate them and your words...blessings.
Comment from Trybuck
Resist the devil and he will flee
if with his thoughts we don't agree
no good
unloved
no hope
A few of his favorite lines
made worthy
extremely loved
all hope abounds
are the answer to his whines
For in Christ we are made worthy
by the blood He shed
Showing us how much we're loved
Giving us hope for life in Him
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Resist the devil and he will flee
if with his thoughts we don't agree
no good
unloved
no hope
A few of his favorite lines
made worthy
extremely loved
all hope abounds
are the answer to his whines
For in Christ we are made worthy
by the blood He shed
Showing us how much we're loved
Giving us hope for life in Him
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Powerful and true are the words you wrote...thank you so much...blessings.
Comment from Glasstruth
Great title! Love the structure and the way its centered. You're right about, "Consuming Enslaving Devouring" It eats you alive. They call this the now generation which is destructive, destroys hope. Can't live without hope. Good luck with the contest! Les
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Great title! Love the structure and the way its centered. You're right about, "Consuming Enslaving Devouring" It eats you alive. They call this the now generation which is destructive, destroys hope. Can't live without hope. Good luck with the contest! Les
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thanks so much Les, for your words...without hope we have nothing...blessings.
Comment from Amy Comstock
This is so beautifully...and uplifting! His word is everything..without Him, we have nothing! Thank you for sharing this! Best of luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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This is so beautifully...and uplifting! His word is everything..without Him, we have nothing! Thank you for sharing this! Best of luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much Amy, for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words...blessings.
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
This was a very powerful and beautifully written poem. Unlike some poems it had a clear story and led somewhere. My mum suffers from depression and if it is okay with, I will share this with her.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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This was a very powerful and beautifully written poem. Unlike some poems it had a clear story and led somewhere. My mum suffers from depression and if it is okay with, I will share this with her.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for the six stars Archie Alexander...I pray that God will bless your mother and give her the strength she needs to step out from under her depression...blessings.
