A Seed Of Faith
Moving Mountains; Poetry Wands Contest Submission77 total reviews
Comment from Skyangel02
The objective is to teach and inform others on how you can use your faith to move mountains. Your poem does not tell anyone HOW to use faith. It just tells them they need to use it. It is like giving a person a shovel and not showing them how to use it. It is useless if a person has no clue how to use it. Reading a book does not take away the deceptions and confusions in this world.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
   |
The objective is to teach and inform others on how you can use your faith to move mountains. Your poem does not tell anyone HOW to use faith. It just tells them they need to use it. It is like giving a person a shovel and not showing them how to use it. It is useless if a person has no clue how to use it. Reading a book does not take away the deceptions and confusions in this world.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
-
Reading a book does not take away the deceptions and confusions in this world....reading the bible does...the bible is filled with people who have used their faith to move mountains...thank you for reading and reviewing...blessings.
Comment from JennieClare
Yes indeed - faith the size of a mustard seed can move mountains and it does. thanks for sharing your faith here in a well crafted poem. Jennie
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
 |
Yes indeed - faith the size of a mustard seed can move mountains and it does. thanks for sharing your faith here in a well crafted poem. Jennie
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank you so m uch Jennie, for the six stars...I truly appreciate them and I am glad you enjoyed my poem...blessings.
-
my pleasure. Jennie
Comment from Mastery
Wow! This is outstanding, author. Such strong verbs you have used throughout the entire work. Images well done in each stanza. I think this is a sure winner. We will see, but I am confident. This is good stuff. Bob
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
Wow! This is outstanding, author. Such strong verbs you have used throughout the entire work. Images well done in each stanza. I think this is a sure winner. We will see, but I am confident. This is good stuff. Bob
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank you so much Mastery, for your words...I am so glad you enjoyed my poem about faith...blessings to you and yours.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Poet,
This is an outstanding piece of writing. Powerful expressions, vivid metaphors, superb rhyming, along with excellent advice. This is one of the best inspirational poems that I have ever read here on fanstory.
I hope you win the contest, you certainly have my vote.
Warm regards,
A fellow fanstorian
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
Dear Poet,
This is an outstanding piece of writing. Powerful expressions, vivid metaphors, superb rhyming, along with excellent advice. This is one of the best inspirational poems that I have ever read here on fanstory.
I hope you win the contest, you certainly have my vote.
Warm regards,
A fellow fanstorian
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Winslow...I don`t know what to say...you honor me with your words...I thank you so much for the six stars...blessings to you.
Comment from Alan K Pease
A spiritual poem at its best reminding us of individual messages that we make can be seen in our own wellbeing whether we are confirmed in faith or not. Fear is the weapon of those who would want us to take a fall. Our strength is measured in our duty to God and the way we treat other people. Excellent poetics. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
A spiritual poem at its best reminding us of individual messages that we make can be seen in our own wellbeing whether we are confirmed in faith or not. Fear is the weapon of those who would want us to take a fall. Our strength is measured in our duty to God and the way we treat other people. Excellent poetics. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank so much Alan K Pease, for your words...I appreciate them...blessings.
Comment from bobbyboy
This is well put and the rhyming works well. You message is taken, but the evangelizing is a bit strong for my taste,
never the less , well put.
bb.
|
This is well put and the rhyming works well. You message is taken, but the evangelizing is a bit strong for my taste,
never the less , well put.
bb.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
Comment from tinams
Very moving. It portrays how easy it is for one negative thought to spiral out of all proportion causing untold pain. we all need faith in something that we can call upon to help us through difficult times. For me it is my family, my bible my family photo albums. I enjoyed your writing very much. :)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
Very moving. It portrays how easy it is for one negative thought to spiral out of all proportion causing untold pain. we all need faith in something that we can call upon to help us through difficult times. For me it is my family, my bible my family photo albums. I enjoyed your writing very much. :)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank you so much tinams, for reading and reviewing...I truly appreciate your words...blessings.
Comment from honeytree
Wonderful art work and words written.
Having our faith and love from God
Who helps us everyday when we ask
Is so important within our lives.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
Wonderful art work and words written.
Having our faith and love from God
Who helps us everyday when we ask
Is so important within our lives.
Honey tree
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank you Honey tree, for reading and reviewing...I appreciate your words...blessings.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A powerful declaration of faith contained in this well written poem of quatrains set off by two groups of three single word lines that define the changing nature of the poet's experience. Beautifully done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
A powerful declaration of faith contained in this well written poem of quatrains set off by two groups of three single word lines that define the changing nature of the poet's experience. Beautifully done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thanks so much Nancy, for your words...blessings.
Comment from LAFraser
Beautiful and inspiring. Thank you for posting such a beautiful piece.
My favorite line:
"A tiny seed of faith in His word is the weapon you must use."
I like the art you chose to display your work. It has been a pleasure to read your work.
Blessings :)
~Eilish
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
|
Beautiful and inspiring. Thank you for posting such a beautiful piece.
My favorite line:
"A tiny seed of faith in His word is the weapon you must use."
I like the art you chose to display your work. It has been a pleasure to read your work.
Blessings :)
~Eilish
Comment Written 06-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012
-
Thank you so much Eilish, for your words...I appreciate them...blessings.
