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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from Dave M
Exceptional
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Barbara,

So Anna's stalker is an armed robber. This is a grisly turn of events. I enjoyed this read and couldn't find anything to criticize.

Dave

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from Fluffyhead
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As usually another great chapter. Am happy Anna is going in a positive direction. Hope she stays on that road.Always a pleasure.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from bhogg
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Hi Barbara - as always, well written with great pace. My only regret was its brevity. I enjoy your work and would love to keep on reading. Always warm regards, Bill

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from JW
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Your story is progressing nicely. And this chapter makes another good addition. No spags were found. The storyline advanced realistically and you definitely left a nice hook.

Good job. JW

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, barbara, you did a great job wriitng this chapter about them finding the person who's been harassing anna, unless bobby is using his truck and staying with him

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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How frightening this must be. There needs to be a better program to inform those at risk from family members released from prison.I know from experience even if you are to be notified, it rarely happens. Seems like we as a society could do better. Well written with suspense enticing the reader to want more~ Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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    I agree, thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
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Hi, Barbara, so both Troy and Anna have soft hearts... Now what about Slim? There's another danger lurking. An interesting chapter, relatively short I'm not ready to stop reading yet...:)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from RebelRose
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I had a feeling she'd recognize the guy but with a different name. Now the plot thickens. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from Nanette Mary
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Hullo Barbara ...

Once again, this relatively short chapter of your book leaves the reader anxious to read the next one.
This is well written with plenty of vivid imagery and there is nothing to suggest changing.
Thank you for sharing this with us and, of course, I now look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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Comment from PoetSpirit
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Very interesting drama, and very well written! I've been away for a while so I'm not familiar with the story line, I will have to go back and read the rest. Very Nice work!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2012

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