Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "part 1 Chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
Excellent as always, Barbara, and not a SPAG in sight. An expected development in that it's Bobby connected. I'm assuming Bobby's mother is behind it. But I've been wrong before. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Excellent as always, Barbara, and not a SPAG in sight. An expected development in that it's Bobby connected. I'm assuming Bobby's mother is behind it. But I've been wrong before. :) Nancy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Is this disabled veteran Sam? There seemed to be many coincidences. This is well written, Barbara. It looks as if they closing in on the culprit. I enjoyed reading this chapter, Barbara. :o) April
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Is this disabled veteran Sam? There seemed to be many coincidences. This is well written, Barbara. It looks as if they closing in on the culprit. I enjoyed reading this chapter, Barbara. :o) April
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Jonesy
Well written. I look closely for SPAG but couldn't find anyway so big kudos there.
I've missed several chapters but still had a strong sense of the story as a whole, so another big selling point.
Excellent job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Well written. I look closely for SPAG but couldn't find anyway so big kudos there.
I've missed several chapters but still had a strong sense of the story as a whole, so another big selling point.
Excellent job.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from HPicasso
As you visit the inspiration all is well, and I see the inspiration is always with you. Great chapter you give us today. That is easy to read you feel conveys much what you write, I really liked.
This chapter is about the dangers of domestic violence. Your dialogue is good. You used a great narrative and fine descriptive writing. Shows Anna as a competent person after all she is been through. Good catch at the ending. I look forward to reading further chapters.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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As you visit the inspiration all is well, and I see the inspiration is always with you. Great chapter you give us today. That is easy to read you feel conveys much what you write, I really liked.
This chapter is about the dangers of domestic violence. Your dialogue is good. You used a great narrative and fine descriptive writing. Shows Anna as a competent person after all she is been through. Good catch at the ending. I look forward to reading further chapters.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
Troy is such a great guy. I'm entirely taken by him and his love for Anna. it's a pleasure to follow the ups and downs of this story. Another great chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Troy is such a great guy. I'm entirely taken by him and his love for Anna. it's a pleasure to follow the ups and downs of this story. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rashi kumar
I hope Anna ends up being safe and happy.
It is horrible to have that a dangerous man behind you.
A very disturbing story, told very well.
Pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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I hope Anna ends up being safe and happy.
It is horrible to have that a dangerous man behind you.
A very disturbing story, told very well.
Pleasure to read!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
Congrats. Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to hear the story about Slim. I think you are wise to make chapters short. I realize noe, mine were too long. I would have had more reviews if shorter.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Congrats. Another great addition to your story. Can't wait to hear the story about Slim. I think you are wise to make chapters short. I realize noe, mine were too long. I would have had more reviews if shorter.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind surgery.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is another absolutely wonderful part of the story, that you have written here for us old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid piece here ma'am..
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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This is another absolutely wonderful part of the story, that you have written here for us old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid piece here ma'am..
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
so is Anna beingg stalked or maybe it was by sheer coincidence that Slim was in the area, only time csn tell, but will Anna be able to hold on to her sanity?
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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so is Anna beingg stalked or maybe it was by sheer coincidence that Slim was in the area, only time csn tell, but will Anna be able to hold on to her sanity?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
Do these people ever have any peace of any kind..now there's some nut out of jail that's dangerous..she just needs to move in with troy's parents...but then that would probably endanger all of them....sigh..............Good part of a chapter. God bless.
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Do these people ever have any peace of any kind..now there's some nut out of jail that's dangerous..she just needs to move in with troy's parents...but then that would probably endanger all of them....sigh..............Good part of a chapter. God bless.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
