Comment from Galactia

Excellent

great senryu

Catholics (3)
pray to protect life (5)
vote en masse (3)

Perfect senryu. I loved how you added spanish to the bottom line. very creative.

great poem

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012

Thanks, Tia. Appreciate your comments.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

I like this
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count................ Spot-on
Flow of piece..................Superb
Artwork..........................Excellent by Yelo34 00
Rhyming.........................N/A
Content .........................Sanity prevailing
Presentation stanzas..... Regular
Alliteration/ assonance..Found " pray protect"
Final synopsis................ Sane and serene
Total.............................. 10/10
Result computed........... Give this five stars
Computed Comments... This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done with the artwork

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012

Thanks, Chris Tee. Always enjoy the computed comments. How does it work to get a sixer??

Comment from Earl of Oxford

Excellent

Subtle support for no birth control I guess, Shari, as I'm not up with American politics.

I haven't a definate view as there are so many different circumstances, but I guess it's all down to whether it's considered murder or not of a human conceived at whatever stage of pregnancy.

Best wishes, earl

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012

I have mixed thoughts too, Earl. In fact, one of our metaphysical speakers in touch with the other dimension miscarried. She wrote a book called Angel Babies, and one idea she espouses is that a fetus chooses to be aborted--maybe realizing he chose the wrong parents or he may be born with a serious defect? An interesting theory.

Comment from LilHippie

Excellent

Very nice! Adorable picture. Very simple, very honest. In the end prayer and our faith is all we have. That is the rock we hold onto in a sea of grief when we lose someone, or through a daily trauma we must endure. There really is nothing else. This poem, this precious little pic is simple, honest and hopeful. Thank you.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012

I fell in love with that picture too. Thanks for your kind review.

Comment from krazykats2011

Excellent

Short, sweet, to the point. Nice. Colors went well together and form was perfect. You chose another topic that worked well here. Thanks for the opportunity to read.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012

Thanks for your sweet review, kk.