As Berries Burst With Juice
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Comment from Tristian
Even before reading who the author was, I felt from the title that this was your poem! The photo, and the poem are both wonderful. I can feel the burst of the berry and the gratefulness for all things in the simple act of eating a berry.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
Even before reading who the author was, I felt from the title that this was your poem! The photo, and the poem are both wonderful. I can feel the burst of the berry and the gratefulness for all things in the simple act of eating a berry.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Tristian, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
I think you borrowed the meter and some of the message from
the hymn. I like that you mention eating just one berry, as if offering the rest for others to partake in. Sharing the bounty. Very in keeping with your message.
You have a wonderful knack, Brooke, for saying big things with little berries.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
I think you borrowed the meter and some of the message from
the hymn. I like that you mention eating just one berry, as if offering the rest for others to partake in. Sharing the bounty. Very in keeping with your message.
You have a wonderful knack, Brooke, for saying big things with little berries.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much, Lee, for your insights :-) Brooke
Comment from misscookie
I'm sorry I don't have a six star. **********
Your poems about berries I found to be refreshing and I love how your poem moves.
You had my attention all the way. this is a good write.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
I'm sorry I don't have a six star. **********
Your poems about berries I found to be refreshing and I love how your poem moves.
You had my attention all the way. this is a good write.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks so very much, Miss Cookie - I truly appreciate your wish for an exceptional rating :-) Brooke
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My pleasure.
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My pleasure.
Comment from psalmist
A delightful poem, Brooke. The alliteration in your title immediately had my mouth watering. I also liked the musical sound of the "brook that burbles by". This reminded me of a walk I used to take bordered by mulberry trees. I enjoyed grabbing a few ripe ones to enjoy along the way. Thanks for sharing. Linda
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
A delightful poem, Brooke. The alliteration in your title immediately had my mouth watering. I also liked the musical sound of the "brook that burbles by". This reminded me of a walk I used to take bordered by mulberry trees. I enjoyed grabbing a few ripe ones to enjoy along the way. Thanks for sharing. Linda
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Linda, thanks so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Brooke,
Your charming poem and more particularly your Notes tell us why rhythm and cadence is so important in poetry. It appeals to the inner us and that is why hymns resonate with it.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
Dear Brooke,
Your charming poem and more particularly your Notes tell us why rhythm and cadence is so important in poetry. It appeals to the inner us and that is why hymns resonate with it.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Reg, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
Nature and creation is a gift
A gift we can all share
These berries would be yummy
To eat and satisfy ones appetite.
The gifts that God gives us all
Can be so special in every way.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
Nature and creation is a gift
A gift we can all share
These berries would be yummy
To eat and satisfy ones appetite.
The gifts that God gives us all
Can be so special in every way.
Honey tree
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Annie, I very much appreciate your gracious review and your most generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from Peter@Poole
And I'm gulping down this delicious poetic juice from you, Brooke. There is no elixir like it that I've ever read in my four years on this site; you demonstrate total mastery of this medium. What a lovely, creative mind, that can thank our Creator in such lovely lines. :) Peter
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
And I'm gulping down this delicious poetic juice from you, Brooke. There is no elixir like it that I've ever read in my four years on this site; you demonstrate total mastery of this medium. What a lovely, creative mind, that can thank our Creator in such lovely lines. :) Peter
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much, Peter - it's 6 am and the sun hasn't even risen, but your words have lit up the room :-) Brooke
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I didn't analyze it, though you know I didn't miss a thing. I thought of you and your morning orange juice. Go with the light, young lady. :) Peter
Comment from Paulpl52
Lovely message in here Brooke, great rhyming and flow to this wonderful poem. We simply have the Lord to thank for his wonderful bounty. Blessings, Paul.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
Lovely message in here Brooke, great rhyming and flow to this wonderful poem. We simply have the Lord to thank for his wonderful bounty. Blessings, Paul.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Paul, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from alexisleech
Another wonderful poem full of natural feelings which represent the writer's awe and respect for nature. I especially like 'No chef could proffer more than this on which I'm dining' Who can argue with the saying 'the best things in life are free' after that? Alexis x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
Another wonderful poem full of natural feelings which represent the writer's awe and respect for nature. I especially like 'No chef could proffer more than this on which I'm dining' Who can argue with the saying 'the best things in life are free' after that? Alexis x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Alexis, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Rob Caudle
If we were all so thankful, for the sweet pleasure, of the gifts we have been given, we would smile much more often. your verse always make the end of my day joyful. thanks for the reminder of how it all works together. oh, and the poetry, was lovely as well; meter. and tone, were spot on. I believe poets to be the best Witter we can read. your verses really are marvelous thanks Brooke for sharing and brightening my day your poetry is becoming a habit I will not soon break
Rob
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
If we were all so thankful, for the sweet pleasure, of the gifts we have been given, we would smile much more often. your verse always make the end of my day joyful. thanks for the reminder of how it all works together. oh, and the poetry, was lovely as well; meter. and tone, were spot on. I believe poets to be the best Witter we can read. your verses really are marvelous thanks Brooke for sharing and brightening my day your poetry is becoming a habit I will not soon break
Rob
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Rob, thanks so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke