Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "part 4, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
I have to pull an Anna now. The police won't get involved until it's darn near too late. Even today with all the cases of abuse, often the police come in after the fact. And that's usually because of a fatality. I can genuinely feel for Anna.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I have to pull an Anna now. The police won't get involved until it's darn near too late. Even today with all the cases of abuse, often the police come in after the fact. And that's usually because of a fatality. I can genuinely feel for Anna.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from Fluffyhead
Love the descriptions of things and that Troy cares so much for Anna. I hope things get better for them. They are good people.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Love the descriptions of things and that Troy cares so much for Anna. I hope things get better for them. They are good people.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you review for the kind review.
Comment from mr elis
The Domestic violence is an every day affair,in the first and second world countries.What's really going on?, is the world coming to end?And in these cases the females are the ones end up in the cemetery.Who-will put-these killers behind bars?
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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The Domestic violence is an every day affair,in the first and second world countries.What's really going on?, is the world coming to end?And in these cases the females are the ones end up in the cemetery.Who-will put-these killers behind bars?
Comment Written 23-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
So glad to see I haven't missed the ending. This is still suspenceful and so realistic as women often are in most danger when they leave. Well done, don't see need for any changes.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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So glad to see I haven't missed the ending. This is still suspenceful and so realistic as women often are in most danger when they leave. Well done, don't see need for any changes.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Flowerangel71
I really liked the artwork chosen for this chapter. The reading was interesting and one of our sad realities in life. I haven't read the other chapters but didn't feel lost at any time. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with your book.
Zari
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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I really liked the artwork chosen for this chapter. The reading was interesting and one of our sad realities in life. I haven't read the other chapters but didn't feel lost at any time. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with your book.
Zari
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review. My husband painted the artwork for me.
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Wow, he is very talented. Its very beautiful.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Read well. No typos, What else can I say? I'm enjoying the story, and hope whoever is aggravating Anna gets caught soon. I think the site will let you read this now.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Read well. No typos, What else can I say? I'm enjoying the story, and hope whoever is aggravating Anna gets caught soon. I think the site will let you read this now.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from livingwords
This is very well written. Clean and crisp. You are moving at a better pace now and it's more interesting. Your dialogue skills result in very natural chatter between your characters. Excellent. Dan :))
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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This is very well written. Clean and crisp. You are moving at a better pace now and it's more interesting. Your dialogue skills result in very natural chatter between your characters. Excellent. Dan :))
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from WLHall
Excellent read. You know how to capture a readers' interest and hold it. I haven't read any of your other chapters, but will. I will become a fan of yours so I can be notified when you post something. It's really refreshing to read something without having to go back over it to get the meaning. Yours flowed very nicely, so it was a quick read. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Excellent read. You know how to capture a readers' interest and hold it. I haven't read any of your other chapters, but will. I will become a fan of yours so I can be notified when you post something. It's really refreshing to read something without having to go back over it to get the meaning. Yours flowed very nicely, so it was a quick read. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thank you for our kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, wow, what a group of bodyguards. Every girl should be so lucky. And, yet, I can feel her desperation about the whole having to be watched situation. It would be hard. Enjoying the story as always... Jerri
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Barbara, wow, what a group of bodyguards. Every girl should be so lucky. And, yet, I can feel her desperation about the whole having to be watched situation. It would be hard. Enjoying the story as always... Jerri
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Than k you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Again another great chapter. I think that this girl is lucky to have people to care for her and her son. I also think she is getting stronger.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Again another great chapter. I think that this girl is lucky to have people to care for her and her son. I also think she is getting stronger.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
