Confessions
The power of forgiveness2 total reviews
Comment from keimosobie
Sometimes the pain we feel makes it impossible to forgive. We want to forgive we want to forget but you can not. This is good 5-7-5 poetry. I didn't see any problems.
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Sometimes the pain we feel makes it impossible to forgive. We want to forgive we want to forget but you can not. This is good 5-7-5 poetry. I didn't see any problems.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
Comment from BLACKDYKE
A brilliant message Pat' and very
cleverly put too. The colours aren't the best for reading, but we get the message! Forgive, and stay within
the family of man. Forgiveness is all
and your poem screws this into place.
eric
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A brilliant message Pat' and very
cleverly put too. The colours aren't the best for reading, but we get the message! Forgive, and stay within
the family of man. Forgiveness is all
and your poem screws this into place.
eric
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
