~ Never Question God ~
A poem asking God...WHY CAN'T I HAVE IT?!15 total reviews
Comment from Chris Tee
But God said "seek and thou shall find"
" ask and thou shall receive"
What went wrong old sport??
This is an absolutely lovely entry and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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But God said "seek and thou shall find"
" ask and thou shall receive"
What went wrong old sport??
This is an absolutely lovely entry and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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Sorry it taken me so long to rely. THANK YOU so very much for the amazing rating and comment my friend!! xoxo
Comment from Denise S
i liked your poem a lot, the rhymes were great. It caused me to think of yesterday , it seemed like a bad day. but now I realise God was keeping something special for me today. Today is a great day, it's true he listens, but we need patience
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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i liked your poem a lot, the rhymes were great. It caused me to think of yesterday , it seemed like a bad day. but now I realise God was keeping something special for me today. Today is a great day, it's true he listens, but we need patience
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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Im so happy my poem gave you a specific reason to think about something. Thank you so much for amazing comment and rating my friend!! xoxo
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Your Faith and trust in God shines through here. I'm also fascinated how you 'know He listens'. Must be a great comfort to you.
Best wishes, earl
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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Your Faith and trust in God shines through here. I'm also fascinated how you 'know He listens'. Must be a great comfort to you.
Best wishes, earl
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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WOW....thank you so very much my friend Earl!! Great comment and rating from you that made me smile.....xoxo
Comment from catch22
I like the message behind your poem, but I couldn't catch the flow of it. For one thing, your rhyme scheme changes from stanza to stanza. Also, the poem's not very structured with respect to meter. If this is meant to be free style, please disregard my previous statements, and let me know. I recommend you make a note in the author's notes for other readers.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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I like the message behind your poem, but I couldn't catch the flow of it. For one thing, your rhyme scheme changes from stanza to stanza. Also, the poem's not very structured with respect to meter. If this is meant to be free style, please disregard my previous statements, and let me know. I recommend you make a note in the author's notes for other readers.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Actually this is indeed meant to be a Free Style poem so I apologize for any confusion. I'm not sure if thaat changes your mind on the rating or not , but either way I'm very grateful you stopped by to read and comment. It's truly appreciated!!
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Yes, that certainly helps! I am on my way to upgrade:)
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Fantastic and THANK YOU so very much!! I also made the additional comment of being free style. :)
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You're most welcome!
Comment from JustADozen
All one has to do is think of what he or she wants. If it is for good it will come. Otherwise it may never come to pass. Then again, who am I to say. Every day is a challenge.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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All one has to do is think of what he or she wants. If it is for good it will come. Otherwise it may never come to pass. Then again, who am I to say. Every day is a challenge.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much for the great comment and high rating!! I entered this on VERY short notice not knowing what would come of it. Thank you again.
