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~ Never Question God ~

A poem asking God...WHY CAN'T I HAVE IT?!

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Comment from Amsterdam
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Girl tell me only this
That I have your heart
For always and you
want me be your side
Whispering
The words
Ill always Love You
And for ever
I will be your lover
And I know if you really care
I will always be there
Truly
Am

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2012
    Thank you....xoxo
Comment from expressions9
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Your poem is well written and really reveals the typical anxieties and eventual surrender of the heart searching for answers from God. I like

"Time to mature and time to grow

God lets me know I'm no longer a baby

Calm down and act like a grown up lady".

God's love for us is so wonderful that, just like a natural parent, there are lessons he wants us to learn as we grow. Some answers to prayer are "yes", "no" and "when".

God bless

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
    Thank you so very much for stopping by to read my poem. I truly appreciate your comment and rating as well....xoxo
Comment from Loann
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I like your poem, Never Question God. Since God is so personal to each one of us, it would be difficult for anyone to make an argument with any of your words of thought. It gives insight to you as a person as well. Beautiful! Loann

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2012

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2012
    Thank you very much....xoxo
Comment from purrfect tale
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I think you poem adds more meaning to the phrase "we are all God's children". Like us mortal parents, God has lessons in patience to teach us.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    So very true my friend!! Thank you so much.........xoxo
Comment from amada
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This is a very human response, for sure we get annoyed at unanswered prayers. Your rhyming words capture so well the spirit of praying and faith. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    Thank you so very much amada for this great comment and rating!! I truly appreciate this. xoxo
Comment from Sharrum
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I thought your poem flowed beautifully. Theres nothing I would change.The words you chose worked very well with the title of the poem. Also, you chose a beautiful picture that went very well with your poem.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    Thank you so very much for the beautiful comment and rating. Its deeply appreciated. xoxo
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Patience is the hardest one....
I liked this you created it well around the prompt and I thought you did a really great job.

Presentation was excellent.
Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    Thank you so much my friend! xoxo
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I feel that way sometimes. I want something so bad, but it is not meant to be. I would like to cry and pout like a child. Then I end up acting like an adult. Great work.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    I am so grateful for your kind comment and high amount of stars. I really do appreciate it.......xoxo
Comment from teacherdub
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Well thought out to meet purpose of contest. Would have preferred to know what He said "No" to, but that is my need when reviewing. Not all see it that way. One line a bit awkward listed below. td


Inside my heart I feel full of shame (awkward rhythm to achieve the rhyme)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    Thank you so very much.....xoxo
Comment from MeagM
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I think this is a really great contest entry. We all struggle with this...battling God and what we want. This is a great reminder that He's in control and we are not! I love the ending with, "forever gracious" ...beautiful word choices! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
    WOW....thanks so much MeagM for the wonderful comment and high amount of stars.......xoxo