A Time to Mourn and a Time to Dance
Parallel on seasons of life and struggles of life6 total reviews
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very touching and has very believable images in it. Winter is a sullen time and when one is sick it becomes worst. Your story has good description of the sadness but also the rejoicing that comes through Jesus our Savior. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Your poem is very touching and has very believable images in it. Winter is a sullen time and when one is sick it becomes worst. Your story has good description of the sadness but also the rejoicing that comes through Jesus our Savior. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Rita. I appreciate your comments. -Judy
Comment from LilHippie
This is wonderful and hopeful. It is well written and Hope things are better. Spring is a cleansing time, a fresh time, holding the promise of new life, and yes, the scent is tha of damp earth and flowers. I do not like winter, but it is beautiful to view, and has Christmas to make it glorious. Your piece is well written, flows well, reads easily and is poignan and hopeful. Thank you for allowing my comments.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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This is wonderful and hopeful. It is well written and Hope things are better. Spring is a cleansing time, a fresh time, holding the promise of new life, and yes, the scent is tha of damp earth and flowers. I do not like winter, but it is beautiful to view, and has Christmas to make it glorious. Your piece is well written, flows well, reads easily and is poignan and hopeful. Thank you for allowing my comments.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you very much. --Judy
Comment from bhogg
shinning (shining?)
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Hi Judy - I enjoyed your essay. It was a bit melancholy, but so is a winter day. I'm not sure I've seen your posts before. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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shinning (shining?)
we can to (drop to)
Hi Judy - I enjoyed your essay. It was a bit melancholy, but so is a winter day. I'm not sure I've seen your posts before. Bill
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thanks for the heads up. I should not have missed those. -Judy
Comment from cce29
First of all, nice photo for the entry. I have not seen a writing like this before. I did like it. I only gave four stars because i think it needs more 'detailed description' and maybe a little longer....but maybe not longer if the descriptive detail was a little better
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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First of all, nice photo for the entry. I have not seen a writing like this before. I did like it. I only gave four stars because i think it needs more 'detailed description' and maybe a little longer....but maybe not longer if the descriptive detail was a little better
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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This was all I had to say on the subject and prefer righting tight and not wordy. Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion.
Comment from justjo66
A nice piece on winter and the hope of spring. Is your husband okay now? I'm sorry if I missed that but I did not see it in your notes or writing. I used to keep journals, too. I always find it comforting to look back at the trials I was facing and see how God has brought us (me) through them. I enjoyed your essay.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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A nice piece on winter and the hope of spring. Is your husband okay now? I'm sorry if I missed that but I did not see it in your notes or writing. I used to keep journals, too. I always find it comforting to look back at the trials I was facing and see how God has brought us (me) through them. I enjoyed your essay.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for this kind review. I have been journaling for years and also find comfort when I go back and see what was going on in the past. My husband died Feb 18, 2011 - but I am finally in the spring time season. God is so good. -Judy
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I am so sorry for your loss but glad that you have come through it with spring in your heart. Yes, God is good.
Comment from uniqueauthor
I liove the cooelations of the seasons of life with the season of nature, As you said. There is a season for everything under the sun, and a purose for every life under heaven.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I liove the cooelations of the seasons of life with the season of nature, As you said. There is a season for everything under the sun, and a purose for every life under heaven.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for reading and commenting. _Judy
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Forgive my sprags. You're welcome. Peace.
