Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "part 3, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from dhee khaye
love it! You write it with a symphonic tone I like your style. Great choice of subject. I love the title. Also the art work that you put in. Congratulations for the recognition certificate. Good job. God bless.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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love it! You write it with a symphonic tone I like your style. Great choice of subject. I love the title. Also the art work that you put in. Congratulations for the recognition certificate. Good job. God bless.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
This is one determined degenerate. If something isn't done, he'll end up hurting or killing Anna. Sadly, it's my understanding that's what happens in many cases.
Connie
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This is one determined degenerate. If something isn't done, he'll end up hurting or killing Anna. Sadly, it's my understanding that's what happens in many cases.
Connie
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
It's great to know that they have a lead of some sort now. You manage to describe the fear experienced by someone who has an obsessive adversary, very well. Troy is turning out to be a dream man, it's just such a shame someone has managed to expose his medical records. I look forward to the next chapter. Alexis x
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It's great to know that they have a lead of some sort now. You manage to describe the fear experienced by someone who has an obsessive adversary, very well. Troy is turning out to be a dream man, it's just such a shame someone has managed to expose his medical records. I look forward to the next chapter. Alexis x
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Another good chapter, Barbara. I'm just wondering when Anna is ever going to learn that she needs protection wherever she goes?
"Good, you're safe. I already called 911. The police are on their way.(")
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Another good chapter, Barbara. I'm just wondering when Anna is ever going to learn that she needs protection wherever she goes?
"Good, you're safe. I already called 911. The police are on their way.(")
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I doubt it, I don't think anybody would really want to believe it. Thank you for the kind review and the catch.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
It's good this is finally coming to a head, Barbara. Anna is going to be driven insane by the constant tension. Well written. :) Nancy
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It's good this is finally coming to a head, Barbara. Anna is going to be driven insane by the constant tension. Well written. :) Nancy
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Helen Tan
I didn't notice any SPAGS here. Keep it up. :D
This scene reveals how much part of Anna's life, Troy's family has become. Betty and Paul are like in-laws to her. If only she can break free, she has a safe and good ready made family waiting to accept her and Michael into their folds.
The sudden attack reminds us that danger can appear anytime. If Troy wasn't with her, who knows what would have happened to Anna and Michael?
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I didn't notice any SPAGS here. Keep it up. :D
This scene reveals how much part of Anna's life, Troy's family has become. Betty and Paul are like in-laws to her. If only she can break free, she has a safe and good ready made family waiting to accept her and Michael into their folds.
The sudden attack reminds us that danger can appear anytime. If Troy wasn't with her, who knows what would have happened to Anna and Michael?
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! The plot thickened in this part and now you have us in suspense Barbara old sport. Well done with another splendid posting here ma'am.
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Wow! The plot thickened in this part and now you have us in suspense Barbara old sport. Well done with another splendid posting here ma'am.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
well Annna just leaps from the frying pan and into the fire doesn't she, will respite truly ever be hers for the taking, I am beginning to fear not
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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well Annna just leaps from the frying pan and into the fire doesn't she, will respite truly ever be hers for the taking, I am beginning to fear not
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Thank you for kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
I do like the fact that maybe now they can find out who is terrorizing Anna. Maybe a happy ending is in store after all. Can't wait for more.
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I do like the fact that maybe now they can find out who is terrorizing Anna. Maybe a happy ending is in store after all. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Uhh! By end something! I loved this chapter, very dynamic and exciting. You has done a excellent work in this novel, Barabara, great.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Uhh! By end something! I loved this chapter, very dynamic and exciting. You has done a excellent work in this novel, Barabara, great.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
