Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "part 3, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
You are to be applauded for the way you maintain the suspense. How awful to even think that anyone could get medical info and put it on the internet. This is another great chapter.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Hello, barbara.
You are to be applauded for the way you maintain the suspense. How awful to even think that anyone could get medical info and put it on the internet. This is another great chapter.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from ArtisALivalor
I give this five stars to the simple fact of helping others to be aware of the dangers out there. We learn from experience.. Thanks for the experience.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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I give this five stars to the simple fact of helping others to be aware of the dangers out there. We learn from experience.. Thanks for the experience.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mr. Green
This is an easy five stars. This is the first chapter I have read in this story but it creates a clear picture in my minds eye.
Your conversations are real and follow a clear logical path. I'm glad you did not have young Michael leave the hood of the car, if he had, I would have jumped onto the page and chased the attacker myself.
I say this, because everyone was taking such good care of Michael and it was clear that Troy was sencere about wanting to see that Anna was safe. When I got to the bottom of the page your attacker came out of no where.
Nice job. I will be looking at other chapters.
Mr. Green
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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This is an easy five stars. This is the first chapter I have read in this story but it creates a clear picture in my minds eye.
Your conversations are real and follow a clear logical path. I'm glad you did not have young Michael leave the hood of the car, if he had, I would have jumped onto the page and chased the attacker myself.
I say this, because everyone was taking such good care of Michael and it was clear that Troy was sencere about wanting to see that Anna was safe. When I got to the bottom of the page your attacker came out of no where.
Nice job. I will be looking at other chapters.
Mr. Green
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from judy corcoran
great writing barbara
easy reading
kept me interested
no nits that i noticed
sorry i have so little time for reviewing that i won't be able to fully read this story of yours - it is very interesting
love judy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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great writing barbara
easy reading
kept me interested
no nits that i noticed
sorry i have so little time for reviewing that i won't be able to fully read this story of yours - it is very interesting
love judy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from oNray
You do have a good story and I am enjoying it but appears to me that we are going slow??? I like the shorter chapters as this makes it easier to read more stories
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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You do have a good story and I am enjoying it but appears to me that we are going slow??? I like the shorter chapters as this makes it easier to read more stories
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from James McCorkle
The suspense is building up again and now Anna has been attacked in public. Young Michael could easily have been badly hurt in this skirmish, but he landed on the car hood and slid toward his Mum. Fortunately Anna now has an eye witness to the attack and Troy will no doubt be prepared to swear as a witness, so perhaps Anna's life can take another step forward. Good progress. James McCorkle.
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The suspense is building up again and now Anna has been attacked in public. Young Michael could easily have been badly hurt in this skirmish, but he landed on the car hood and slid toward his Mum. Fortunately Anna now has an eye witness to the attack and Troy will no doubt be prepared to swear as a witness, so perhaps Anna's life can take another step forward. Good progress. James McCorkle.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Let's hope that Anna's life improves. James.
Comment from Leen1
Good depiction of what an abused woman may go through from time to time. I appreciate you taking up this cause through your writing. It is a very serious matter and something that every woman should be aware of. The artwork is also well deserving of recognition. Highly effective piece and very well written.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Good depiction of what an abused woman may go through from time to time. I appreciate you taking up this cause through your writing. It is a very serious matter and something that every woman should be aware of. The artwork is also well deserving of recognition. Highly effective piece and very well written.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your narrative does a good job of juxtaposing the elements of danger, stalker; and Troy, protector. Yes, Stalker has definitely messed up.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Your narrative does a good job of juxtaposing the elements of danger, stalker; and Troy, protector. Yes, Stalker has definitely messed up.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
VEry intriguing. I am surprised Anna did not recognize her attacker. I can't wait to find out who it is. Thanks for sharing. Very interesting.
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VEry intriguing. I am surprised Anna did not recognize her attacker. I can't wait to find out who it is. Thanks for sharing. Very interesting.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hate domestic violence or any violence really, but this kind of thing is worse cause the passion behind it is worse. Good write Barbara. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Hate domestic violence or any violence really, but this kind of thing is worse cause the passion behind it is worse. Good write Barbara. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
