Can't afford toothpaste
A Cinquain24 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
Living
Within my means
I do put my money
Where my mouth is but still I have
Bad breath
What an awesome poem.
entertaining, easy to read, Witty and humerus.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
Living
Within my means
I do put my money
Where my mouth is but still I have
Bad breath
What an awesome poem.
entertaining, easy to read, Witty and humerus.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Tia, I thank you my friend, happy that you like the poem, take care and enjoy life, God bless you.
Comment from rashi kumar
What a great satiric tone!
Very well-thought of and extremely well-penned,
with a tint of humor and so much of message to the 'inflators'
Pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
What a great satiric tone!
Very well-thought of and extremely well-penned,
with a tint of humor and so much of message to the 'inflators'
Pleasure to read!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello beti, so glad you like the write, thank you very much, take care, namaste.
Comment from Fluffyhead
baking soda always works. Love the quasiseriousness of the poem. Very cool and fun to read. Picture rocks too Love the use of puns
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
baking soda always works. Love the quasiseriousness of the poem. Very cool and fun to read. Picture rocks too Love the use of puns
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Fluffyhead, my friend I am glad you like the poem, I appreciate your great sense of humor in the review, thank you very much.
Comment from manjuneelam
A profound composition which conveys the message about inflation pretty well. A good thought at the right time. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
A profound composition which conveys the message about inflation pretty well. A good thought at the right time. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
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Hello Manju, so happy you like the poem, appreciate the time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.