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Can't afford toothpaste

A Cinquain

24 total reviews 
Comment from Galactia
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Living
Within my means
I do put my money
Where my mouth is but still I have
Bad breath

What an awesome poem.

entertaining, easy to read, Witty and humerus.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
    Hello Tia, I thank you my friend, happy that you like the poem, take care and enjoy life, God bless you.
Comment from rashi kumar
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What a great satiric tone!
Very well-thought of and extremely well-penned,
with a tint of humor and so much of message to the 'inflators'
Pleasure to read!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
    Hello beti, so glad you like the write, thank you very much, take care, namaste.
Comment from Fluffyhead
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baking soda always works. Love the quasiseriousness of the poem. Very cool and fun to read. Picture rocks too Love the use of puns

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
    Hello Fluffyhead, my friend I am glad you like the poem, I appreciate your great sense of humor in the review, thank you very much.
Comment from manjuneelam
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A profound composition which conveys the message about inflation pretty well. A good thought at the right time. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
    Hello Manju, so happy you like the poem, appreciate the time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.